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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2025-02-01 16:00:08 +0000 UTC

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M. Ryan

Wish Carter pushed harder to the prince losing track of time. Seems like an oversight just to help the plot and out of character for carters intelligence. Even a throwaway of the prince telling Carter he has it under control even if he doesn’t would go a long way to showing Carter at least checked.

jmundt33a

Words missing. That was already? What?? Pointless? Futile? Too late?

Marvin

Visually, you can see her on the cover for this collection. It will be a while before we see her in this book though. At least 10 chapters. Maybe we’ll see her toward the end of the month.

Justin Webb

I want to see the goddess in jade

Marvin

I'm not really sure when Eowyn is going to show up again. I have to find the right moment for her, and I'm basically just playing it by ear. Her return isn't in my outline as of yet, but that could change if the right opportunity appears.

Gennydoll Weber

The princess

Marvin

Having a contribution ladder at the end is a good idea. Might steal that.

Marvin

The goddess in jade? Or are you talking about eowyn, the princess?

Tommy

Or a possible collaborator

Gennydoll Weber

Are we gonna meet that cultivator girl searching for Carter soon? I'm so curious if she'll be his next wife lol

jmundt33a

Do ALL Cultivators have this? Is it something that grows when the cultivator begins the practice? Or is it something physical with the recruits for this part of the Black Beast Sects sphere of influence?

James coe

I think that carter did inspect the woman and she showed up so she shouldn't be a cultivatior if I rememberhow it works correctly but just being a trickzie person is always a possibility

Marcell Palmer

Velicia is seriously giving off similar vibes as Lisette from book 2. Could just be me but the guards seemed to give her more consideration than the prince.

Detectivetrap23

That’s a good idea, if lowering your cultivation makes your level appear lower (as we learned this chapter) she could be suppressing her cultivation to make the system show her as weak

SiI3nt

Yeah, seems like herius is a more primal type of guy allowing his list taken over during a war campaign. Honestly he still seems like a humble rich brat that can't be bothered unless it benefits him some how. I don't know why but it just seems right. Herius either needs to step it up or be greatly rewarded at the end of this war as of rn... Don't know about later. This is just my opinion

Gary Becker

Bet she is an elder hiding her level

Vorsayo

I didn’t he had teachers stuck in Sanctuary. I thought the people stuck I there were construction workers! 😛

Vorsayo

Now that Carter found that cultivators have a dantian (which system users don’t have) he has the perfect method to scan for infiltrators and spies.

Vorsayo

Even more suspicious of her now.

jmundt33a

Give it an hour of alone time.

NovaZero

Would be appropriate if System listed people by contribution.

NovaZero

gone to the sight > site

NovaZero

Ok. But seriously "mama-empowered kicks struck me, and I slid off" that's gonna need rework to make sense

NovaZero

mama-empowered kicks. Hahahahah

ArbabSB

My opinion of Herius is dropping like a stone. At the end of this he better be appropriately grateful to Carter for winning this campaign for him. Interesting look at how cultivators work. I wonder what Carter will do with this information. Though, once again the prisoner he takes is a woman lol. Sakura just suddenly got a migraine, but doesn't know why.

Liam

Now that Carter know about the cultivators dantian, he probably is going to get more prisoners to get more information from them, but I hope he remembers the teleporter device so he can send the instruction engineers back home.

Cdonovan

I agree. Will be interesting to see how quickly the prince falls back under her spell after this.

jmundt33a

Against me, not before Should be the guards not they guards Site of the ambush. Not sight.

Detectivetrap23

So prince herius has been having sex with velicia for multiple days and didn’t realize it? Yeah nothing suspicious there at all He’s so lucky Carter is there to pick up the slack.


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