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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2025-02-05 16:00:08 +0000 UTC

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SiI3nt

If that were to happen 5 mins will last.... Find out on the next episode of dragon (this) ball (out) z

Gennydoll Weber

Really enjoyed the chapter! Excited to see how the Eldritch and dragon powers to combine. Does that mean he'll be an apocalyptic Eldritch dragon if he ever shape shifts? Lol. My imagination is going crazy!

Marvin

I edited that part in later. I will just make a note to clarify things when I go over them in a few months.

jmundt33a

When you describe the initial dogpile of the ambush, you list weapons or lack for four people. As if the group of Elders has 5 and not 4. What weapons does the weakest one use? Fists, daggers, or sword? Aah. The weak guy is the only only swordsman. You must mean Mana Barrage here, and teaching it to the auxiliaries was a good idea. But you never mention the spell name in this battle. Why?

Vorsayo

What about (this isn’t even my final form) 😂

Marvin

Still waiting for a chance on the second one. But there will be plenty of upcoming "You're a frog in a well!" and "We had eyes, but could not see Mount Tai" references.

Vorsayo

Make (thousand years to early to fight me) reference ✅ Make (Master, forgive me, but I’ll have to go all out… Just this once) reference…

Vorsayo

Great chapter! IT STILL feels like Carter isn’t even close to needing to pull out all the stops, his ascension to B-Grade and all the other bonuses he got have put him at a much higher level equivalent than first glance would suggest. I would guess after his recent levels his actually combat ability level is closer to 300-325. I don’t feel like he has been challenged or been so desperate for victory, or as close to dying since he fought Morgathar. Maybe the Torchlight Dragon or the Lich King but even they didn’t feel as desperate to me. I really cannot wait for him to be in that level of fight again. I’m guessing it will take an A-Grade at this point to make him go all out.

Marvin

He will definitely be learning from them as he approaches A-Grade, and moreso when he tries to reach beyond A-Grade, which is the maximum the standard system allows.

Marvin

He is not. That is waiting for him to equip, but once he does it stays permanently equipped, barring something extra-ordinary. He's reluctant to embrace it as of yet, and there are no threats that he would need the stat boost for. If he had actually been caught in the trap or been up against more powerful elders, he might have been forced to use it though.

Adam M.

Question: when Carter is using his signature skill of Apocalypse Dragon is he equipping his Chaos Dragon title also, or not?

Adam M.

Good chapter. Glad to have a little action.

Tommy

Another thought, it will be very interesting to see what Carter learns from and then incorporates what he learns from the cultivators, both their biology/cultivation as well as their technology for lack of a better word. With Aethersmithing he will be able to learn how their enchantments and such work which open even more possibilities as he may potentially combine the two

jmundt33a

I think if Carter gets a few decisive victories that cripple the Black Beast pagoda force while also flushing out and eliminating spies and traitors, he could delegate to Cyra during a short sabbatical and the crusade wouldn’t fall apart.

xerxes

I think the traitor works for a different prince and wants to make the crussade fail. The possibilities of traitors working for different princes was mentioned in previous chapter. Carter is loyal to Prince Herius, powerful and used his influence to help the prince in the strategic meetings. Without Carter the crussade will most likely fail.

jmundt33a

Carter sees her biology in her soul? Huh? Maybe adjust the wording slightly. Should be descendant Perhaps beginning consecutive sentences. Maybe something like: Given Mimiko’s enthusiastic cooperation, I saw no need to waste the manor’s only improvised prison cell on her. Current sentence felt awkward, but I don’t know that that’s any better. Should be hastily gave me a location. Should be great distances Should be I was alarmed to realize that I was dealing with more than one… Took hold in consecutive sentences. Second one should switch to activated Capitalize Blood Frenzy after neatly with Should be smoothness to them Just boost. That way new power doesn’t feel repetitive in the next phrase. Should be target’s arms Capitalize Lifesteal You have exploded in consecutive sentences. Maybe consider a synonym, but I can’t think of a simple one in this context. Maybe two remaining instead of remaining two Should be glanced at You have other cultivator and other one and the same sentence. It’s a little stilted.

jmundt33a

You say problem, I say opportunity. If he pulls bigwigs in fast, Carter can test the full extent of his skills and spells faster which means the opportunity for a quick, decisive victory. Such a victory would give Carter the chance to delegate (to Cyra) and go home to Earth for a visit sooner. Seems Reluna needs wrangling.

jmundt33a

Maximus is probably the better twist, but there’s no indication he’d have a beef with Carter. Carter’s deferring credit, following orders, and saving lives. Unless it’s a killing the Golden Goose situation, Max wouldn’t seem to make sense as the traitor.

Npd9913

Woo hoo new chapter! Just commenting real quick, it's descendent, not decedent.

Detectivetrap23

Not exactly surprising there is a traitor in the campaign. The elders said “curse that bastard for lying to us” so we can rule out Abesa given that she’s a woman. Morin has already been suspiciously incompetent and cowardly so he’s my suspect.

Sorahn

Awesome stuff. Hoping we can get an update on where the rest of the FMCs are in terms of levels and class soon!

ArbabSB

Morin serms like the obvious choice. But it might have even have been Maximus, the seemingly friendly and competent one.

Tommy

Oh yeah this is the stuff! Great chapter. I can’t wait to find out who sold him out and watch the girls tear them apart.

ArbabSB

That last elder who got away is going to be a problem. Even if he isn't about to spring another trap now, based on his intelligence the Black Beasties will bring much greater force against Carter next time. “Damn it! Curse that bastard for lying to us. This one is way too strong.” - Why do I get the feeling Legates Morin and Abesa, or maybe even the supposedly friendly Legate Maximus, sent Carter into a cultivator ambush to eliminate him as a rival? Nice to see level up notifications for Carter. The sooner he gets into the higher levels of B-Grade the better. If the A-Grade is level 400, he's got a long period of growth in B-Grade yet. Seems like signature skills, with their greater scope, are the System's attempts to mimic the "smoothness" of cultivator abilities.

jmundt33a

Nice! So, who tipped them? Morin? Modern use of bastard as an epithet is typically leveled at men, though its origin is unisex.


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