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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 20

🕑 Added 2025-02-07 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Brian T

If she was Elder Blackhand, wouldn’t she be his direct enemy?

zombies wolking

No it seems she was infiltrating black beast looking for something right as they drove them from the city

jmundt33a

Maybe a rival either within the same sect or an opposing sect? Why is Black Beast working with Jade’s Sect if there’s such mutual disdain?

jmundt33a

Yes, but does this mean a seduction challenge like the one he avoided in his 10 quests, or relying on Myrina’s method, or just a power struggle in a climactic confrontation as with rough draft Lisette?

jmundt33a

Fighting for the artifact is definitely possible, but would it come down to a charisma flex, scepter time, or relying on Myrina’s version of legal practice again?

jmundt33a

Cyra knows nothing about the Architects that we’re aware of. But she knows that Myrina’s steadiest source of income back home was selling corpses of slain foes to wizards for spare parts or experimentation. She’s seen the transactions before and probably sold some herself. This should seem like Carter behaving like the wizards she’s used to.

Michael Woolhiser

It makes sense. She comes from a race of muscle heads, so it likely didn't occur to her that you would dissect a humanoid. Also, cultivation seems a bit anathema in system controlled space, not because the system is against it necessarily but because the current diminished architects are. So learning about cultivation is a risky business in the first place.

Julian Lachner

I think velicias is mid to high b grade with a charisma based class. She and cater will come to blows at the end of the war, after he finds exactly what she is looking for and he does not want her to have it.

Marcell Palmer

Still leaning towards her being a charisma based class like Lisette. I don't think there was anything really left "unresolved" after Myrina made sure justice prevailed. Too many high leveled characters backing down or acting like simps.

jmundt33a

Why is Cyra puzzled or freaked out by Carter’s behavior here? She’s had years of experience with Myrina. Kill bandits, sell bodies to wizards, repeat.

jmundt33a

I agree about the arrogance and seduction. This might be an agent of the failing Architect, but said Architect wouldn’t lower herself to disguise her true power or to fornicate with a lowly inexperienced B-Grade for the sake of a cover.

jmundt33a

I think it should be no scales lingering on my hands. More closely instead of closer Remove a look at Change disappointing to dissipating You have further study twice in one sentence. Maybe the second should be closer examination or something similar? Should be than they anticipated. Usually with gobbling it’s gobbling up. Should be have been released Should be through our net around the city should be the concluding phrase. Put after legendary. Should be an other red-lipped smile. Should be out of the city. Either reached a hand up to or reached up to. I think the first works better Should be on his other hand or the preceding description should be reworked. Assassin? No one seems to be an assassination specialist that we’ve met so far. Remove the second across the table. Just staring down a B-Grade works fine. Two instances of across the table in consecutive sentences is repetitive.

NovaZero

Instead of Architects, she's one of the. Administrator families?

NovaZero

Backhand the Blackhand!

Vorsayo

That makes sense. I mean this story is awesome either way and this feels like is ramping up to something huge.

Vorsayo

I did say it could be an agent of her’s.

Marvin

Yeah, I've cut the cast down as much as possible to try and keep things moving, but this is as fast as things can go without me outright skipping important scenes.

ArbabSB

I get the feeling that architect descendant lady is neither capable of the subtlety needed to disguise herself as a "lesser" entity, nor would she be willing to even try it and effectively "slum it" among the lower grades. I don't think she'd be able to bring herself to have sex with a lowly B-Grade like Herius or speak to Carter without arrogance, even for a disguise.

Vorsayo

I wonder if she is an agent of that crazy architect descendant lady or even her in disguise, she could manipulate the system to show a false identity pretty easily. I also wonder if the artifact is the new system infrastructure that Carter built as it was mentioned her control room was in rough shape and she could use Carter’s stuff to make repairs.

Vorsayo

Thanks for the chapter. I only wish the plot was moving along a bit quicker. Not trying to be overly critical or anything. Love this series and excited to get to the meat and potatoes of the campaign.

Tommy

Now that would be interesting

Cdonovan

Now I'm intrigued with what you came up with for Velicia's storyline.

ArbabSB

Props to this Blackhand guy for having a clearly villainous sounding name. Nice of him to make sure there's no confusion regarding his moral alignment.

ArbabSB

Tbf Lady Velicia being a Black Beast Sect infiltrator would probably have made dealing with her too straightforward given her seeming importance to the plot. Thing is, we don't have enough info to make a confident prediction as to her identity and motives. Her seeming lack of a dantian indicates she's not a cultivator, but can powerful cultivators hide them somehow? One thing I'm sure of is she's a B-Grade like Carter and not a D-Grade. Is she a B-Grade version of Lisette, with grander goals? An agent of those "heretics" trying to create an imitation of the System? The fact that she is looking for a specific artifact indicates she's not just an opportunist who's attached herself to Herius for political reasons. Also Elder Blackhand? Possible final boss for this book?

jmundt33a

Very interesting. A high D Grade can make a rising B Grade with fate affinity stand down. Whoever she is, that initial Examine ID has to be a decoy. Elder Blackhand sounds like his methods would be similar to High Priest Bloodhand from the Cult of the Chaos Serpent. How many roots does Teviro have open?

George

Seems like a goddess, leaning towards the chaos variety with her talking about kindred spirits.

Npd9913

Tytc! Hm hmm hmmmm who is this lady? Hmmm wasn't there a heretic faction (System folks, cultivators, and heretics right?) Maybe related to that?

zombies wolking

I’m betting she turns out to be a friend of the jade lady


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