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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2025-02-08 16:00:08 +0000 UTC

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DanteFromTheInferno

That side note info is wild, I'm tempted to look up the book/series but knowing the MC's balls get ripped off at the end, idk if I want that image stuck in my head besides right now.

NovaZero

I wouldn't be happen to why, would I? Hehehe

Marvin

Carter doesn't know one way or another yet.

jmundt33a

His scan only means she isn’t physically like Black Beast. Do Jade and others in her Sect have roots and a core? Or does their cultivation physically express and cycle differently?

Tommy

I could not agree with this more, the progression of Carter is very well done, my only comment/desire would be to see the girls progress more along side him, while they will never catch up, they can’t fall too far behind

Marvin

Thanks guys. I do find I write a bit faster when I’m confident the story is going well, so your words of encouragement may earn a bonus chapter every now and again!

Mistweaver

Agree with ArbabSB- you’re doing a great job with Carter. Also good choice with the workers.

Marvin

Any cultivation stuff will be approached from an aethersmithing angle. I don’t want to do a switcheroo on book 5 and change genres. But I do want the freedom to patch up areas where litrpg progression systems start to break down.

Sorahn

Great chapter. Agree with you, it was the right time for Carter to come clean, but the little comic relief was funny while it lasted. Definitely a few threads starting to converge.

Gennydoll Weber

I agree he would eventually tell them the truth to the workers. Maybe he becomes a hybrid of the cultivator and system. That would be interesting and different.

Marvin

There will be more of those here and there.

Marcell Palmer

Great chapter. I agree it seemed out of character for him to not come clean to the workers.

ArbabSB

Also appreciate the little moments between Carter and his ladies. I've missed those.

Marvin

Thanks. That is something I work hard on.

Marvin

It was a wild one, haha. Back in 2013 there was a lot less in the litrpg / progression fantasy subgenre to read. We made do with what we had, even if it was weird.

jmundt33a

Should be cultivators’ path to power. Should be scroll on the table. Should be bring with it Either little jurisdiction or little power to help. Should be formed up. Should be supposed to have had Should be scanned Should be the two of them.

Detectivetrap23

As much as I enjoyed the construction workers getting paid more and more joke, it does make sense to have it end at some point. Both cultivators talked so I wonder how he’ll decide which to let live. I would say he should just cripple their cultivation and let them both live but they’re b rank so that might be above his level to do at this point. I’ve never heard of that novel and after the ringing endorsement of “it ends with a crazy witch ripping the MCs testicles off” I don’t think I’ll check it out haha

ArbabSB

Well there's the Goddess in Jade, but it'll probably a while before her and Carter become romantically involved. Though it might be interesting for Carter to have a love interest a whole Grade higher (she's the equivalent of A-Grade right?)

ArbabSB

Okay so there's something on this planet valuable enough that both Elder Blackhand and Lady Velicia are looking for it. I wonder if that architect lady Vaust knows about it (and thus it's System-infrastructure related) or not? Our Jade Goddess also divined something of interest in this world, though she's here for Carter, but maybe this artifact is also a piece of the puzzle for her. The cultivator pair in love (whether romantic, platonic, familial, etc.) were both strangely heartwarming and funny. Even in an organization as cut-throat as the Black Beast Sect, Even Evil Has Loved Ones. Also I love how you really live up to the "progression" part of progression fantasy in your writing. Carter definitely feels like the prodigy he is (without being boringly perfect), meeting these experienced and powerful enemies on their level and surpassing them. And increasing in both power and knowledge constantly instead of being stuck in noob mode like some MCs unfortunately do.

Cdonovan

Ah, so what what the elder is after is what Velicia wants Carters help to find.

EPS

Good choice with the builders, it would have got annoying to keep reading about him not dealing with it, it was out of character. I like that they are searching for something that’s exciting can’t wait. Is he going to to find another love interest during this campaign?


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