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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2025-02-14 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

Sadly, I feel she is more knowledgeable than Blackhand. And will not react well to what she sees as a double cross. That might lead to a Lissette cubed level problem. But I don’t know if the resolution would be Myrina’s law practice, or a contest of wills, skills, and magic in the bedroom.

jmundt33a

I don’t like her as much as Wednesday, but I like her better than Reluna so far. The Buffy contradiction mix is better balanced. That being said, I’d hold off on inviting her in until it’s proven she’s not just out for a better offer.

Gennydoll Weber

With control over this will it make Carter King over the planet? How does one move a planetary core? Hmm so many possibilities!

Detectivetrap23

So the removal of the hub is what the sytem wants, not what Vaust wants. Right?

jmundt33a

Mimiko’s does seem a bit like Reluna 2.0, huh?

jmundt33a

Comma after name I think the punch qualifies as motion. Should be sprang anyway. Maybe dishing out instead of dealing. Should be arm, not army. Should be Myrina’s and my They went through camp to a large camp? Need a different word for the second camp. Quick is incorrect, but if you change to quickly, you have another instance of repetition. Exclamation point after here Remove down. Should be down on my own head. Should be names. Should be offices Should be stared around instead of eyed it. Avoids repetition Would at least help Should be fill it up Should be deep, not deeply

jmundt33a

Wade would have a ball teasing Amazons.

NovaZero

The Heaven-sundering.. what the shit that sounds awesome!

Marvin

Read on and find out!

ArbabSB

Carter will probably eventually get a System quest with the description: Quest: Free me from this Vaust bitch. Reward: My eternal gratitude and loyalty.

Marvin

Maybe! She would need a character arc of some sort before Carter is interested in her.

Marvin

Depends on how much you guys like her!

Matt Geller

Hmm, Mimiko could easily become the assistant to the Jade Goddess, like Reluna is to Carter. So many possibilities, so many paths. Is Mimiko redeemable enough to help re-establish the true path of the system. If the system is truly guiding Carter’s path. So many trials and tribulations ahead, only time will tell.

Ritsu 229

So does carter add a system-converted cultivator to his harem?

ArbabSB

I don't know if Elder Blackhand has any specific plan in mind for this System hub (IIRC he didn't know exactly what he was looking for, only that it was important), but we've seen cultivators co-opt and modify System infrastructure to harvest kindling energy before, so that's one possibility. My question is: what does Lady Velicia, Prince Herius' girlfriend, want with it, and how much does she know about it?

Matt Geller

I have a feeling that Carter’s path to Godhood is being guided by the system in order for him to deal with Valy Vaust plus adding the Jade Goddess to his harem will enable him to put everything to right dealing with the cultivators from Jade‘s realm to the system Itself, if Carter isn’t careful he could become the single most powerful person in the verse. With the facility on the shard being so similar I do believe Carter may in fact be a descendant of the architects. I wonder does Carter place it in his mystic realm which would prevent any outside influence from attacking it or does he place it under his castle on the shard near crownhill.

ArbabSB

I think Carter will have to actively free the captive System node from the devices/containment infrastructure Lady Vaust has her trapped in. I doubt she can escape on her own to the hub once Carter sets it up.

Adam M.

Good chapter! 🤔 My guess is that Carter will take control of the system hub allowing him to pull together all remaining pieces of Earth

jmundt33a

If that’s the hub, can the chained System intelligence escape to that hub? Or will this beef up the Governess?

zombies wolking

Agreed on all accounts

WhiteRabbit

I wonder, if he takes it will the system collapse on that planet?

ArbabSB

I like Mimiko. She makes a good ego-boosting sycophant for Carter. I wonder how far word of the Supreme Heaven-Sundering Fate-Defying Magnificent Unrivaled Apex Clan shall spread among the societies of the cultivators and how great their legend will grow.

ArbabSB

Oh wow. I was expecting a buried artifact, not a whole facility. Lots of good loot to furnish Carter's mystic realm. It'll be super fancy by the time this campaign is done. Nice to get confirmation that the golem shard was an architect settlement. Though this makes it more urgent that Carter gets back to salvage what he can from there before Reluna totally wrecks the place. I wonder if its significant that it's less similar to the underground city. Maybe that was an earlier architect city, before their magitek was as advanced. And finally the prize at the end. A System Planetary Hub. I wonder what functions it has and if it can power up Carter's mystic realm e.g. giving it access full planet level quantities of resources (e.g. kindling energy and/or mana), improving the System infrastructure Carter built to handle more complex functions, etc? And if it can be used to house a System node liberated from House Vaust? As eager as I am to see Carter complete the quest and start studying this thing, I have a feeling Elder Blackhand will show up any second now.

Swordcollector45

Nice! Carter is gonna fuck with a ton people by taking that haha including that architect lady😄!


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