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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 25

🕑 Added 2025-02-15 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Marcell Palmer

Kill 'em early, kill 'em quick, don't forget to loot their shit.

kalmarin

That depends on how you do it. If you tone her down it might remove why people liked her in the first place. I'm personally a fan of a side-harem like how Theo has the Whitewood clan and some later characters, but it might not be a Carter thing and this series is not as horny as Spellheart so I dunno.

ArbabSB

So if as Marvin said it's 400 stats/level at B-Grade, then as Blackhand is over 100 levels higher than Carter, that gives him a 40000 total stat advantage. I'm all for Carter taking this guy out quickly since there seems to be so much to do this book. But IMO he should get some more levels to reduce the gap first. Otherwise, that undermines Carter's own growth in levels and stats to that level and beyond as those numbers won't mean anything anymore in terms of practical power.

Matt Geller

I believe she may be a high C grade version of Lisette, able to influence one person but not a group, and she is like blackhand needing Carter with his skills. She may prove to be a problem when she finds out that Carter acquired the planetary system hub, she has influence with the Prince Herius, Carters brother in-law.

Matt Geller

With Myrina, Sakura and Bridget in his team for this quest, when he gets the notification of the quest being completed then it should push Myrina into B grade with Sakura and Bridget meeting B grade or very close behind Myrina correct?

Marvin

Yeah, if people wanted her as a love interest, I would go back and tone down/justify that behavior. I still could probably rescue her character with the right backstory, but that would take a bit of page space and I’ll only do that if readers really like her.

MrCynical

She's too transparently self serving to be a love interest I think. I like her character, but I don't necessarily like her because of how quickly she'd sell out anyone for personal gain which has been repeatedly shown.

Marvin

I will see. It has been a while since the last bonus chapter.

Marvin

I am curious how much people like her. If people actually want her as a potential love interest, I might make some minor edits.

Indigo

Excellent chapter as always Would the grand overlord be so kind as to bless us mere mortals with a bonus chapter this Valentine's weekend?

Sheffi Ben-David

I feel like she isn't nearly influential enough to be a B grade Lisette. If she were, she'd have the entire army wrapped around her finger by now.

Tommy

Am I alone in hoping that Mimiko sticks around? I think she has a lot to offer on the cultivator side of things.

jmundt33a

Typo mucked things up. Apologies.

NovaZero

When we next see Blackhand he's almost dead... Because having such a dangerous system being tripped on you is no joke. And Carter's standards don't apply to those who are "lesser", especially cultivators.

Marvin

Carter should be around 245-250 here. And he will get the notification for completing the quest next chapter.

xerxes

The quest was about removing and relocating the planetary hub. It only should be completed after he installed the hub on another planet. He was level 242 for race and level 243 for his class when he conquered the last city.

ArbabSB

Lvl 330 already? Too high isn't it? Wasn't it in the 230s instead?

perfringens

How dare you! Dual bladed lightsabers are great and totally don't have a stupid design flaw where another lightsabers can cut just trough the middle like when Kenobi killed Maul (again)

jmundt33a

I mean, that still might make her B-Grade Lisette with more layers.

jmundt33a

Last check, it was in the 230s, race and class…I think.

Gennydoll Weber

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what Carter does with blackhand!

ArbabSB

I hope Velicia isn't just Lisette but B-Grade. I wonder if she's a member of these heretics trying to build their own System. It would explain why a planetary System hub would be of interest to her, to study it and reverse engineer the design, as well as incorporate it into their own infrastructure.

EPS

Great chapter, I’m getting such a Pokémon team rocket vibe from the bad guys right now weird I know! They seem just as inept and the dialogue… it’s great though I kinda dig it

Corac

I kinda like the thought that he's delta with rather early. I could see it happening faster and easier once the rest of the girls hit b grade and help Carter overwhelm him. Makes sense to me at least

ArbabSB

Has Carter technically completed the quest to remove the System Hub? He didn't get a notification at the end there. I know Carter punches well above his weight, but taking into account the stat-gain per level at B-Grade and thus the total stat difference between Carter and Blackhand, Carter might need some more levels before he 1v1's Blackhand. Otherwise stats and levels start to lose all meaning. Then again, if he can be stalled by C-Grade golems I can see Carter taking him out with his impressive mix of abilities. What is Carter's level now?

jmundt33a

Should be putting out or giving off Machinery twice in four words The vessel is the size of a person? Should be a mysterious vessel the size of a person and filled with Should be took flight Swore. Not sword Either sprang or had sprung Either bisect me or cut me in two. Bisect me in two is repetitive. Should be was qualified (or able) If first qualified stays, change the next to counted

Darius Sanguna

I'm all for that elder dying early, no need for him to be another miniboss Carter has to go through for no reason. Use the extra few chapters you gain by blackhand being a wimp to finish other plotlines.

jmundt33a

Feels like the more dangerous opponent is back at base. Carter’s not a Darth Maul fan?? With how cool, dark, and imposing he tries to be? Hmm.

Detectivetrap23

Aw I really miss Gobgob too… but we need to remember this temporary separation is for her personal development and self actualization and endure!


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