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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chpater 26

🕑 Added 2025-02-16 16:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Matt Geller

Now question being was Carter still in the robes of a cultivator when they broke down the door to the system hub and saw him there. Does that mean Valy Vaust will believe it was a cultivator trying to access or damage the system or does she believe someone in the system has now usurped her for control of the system hub?

jmundt33a

And pest control. The weirdest part of this is that every major player in this multi-front war seems to be wrong. Vaust and the Black Beast jerks are equally mega-wrong. Most of those under The System don’t know or care how it works, how it’s maintained or what the dangers are. Black Beast is just grasping for more power in its ouroboros of internal strife, and the bigwigs of Jade’s sect just seem sour that the System’s existence means they aren’t as special or revered as they feel they should be. Finally, the heretics have Jackson Hammond problems from Jurassic Park. Worse, no one’s actually interested in improving anything.

jmundt33a

I take it that means near godhood.

Marvin

We only got Jade’s level in cultivator terms. It was said to be “approaching ascension.”

jmundt33a

Is anyone else reminded of the first rover scene in Armageddon or Watney’s experiments in The Martian?

jmundt33a

Did we get a Level notice on Jade in her epilogue?

NovaZero

Tech support. Now with plumbing and electrical.

jmundt33a

I think her growth was already stalling out. Her captive node isn’t free yet. There wasn’t time to complete or even start the info transfer.

jmundt33a

Again…feels like we need a full Rommie treatment for The Governess before a fleeing sector of the system can be sheltered. Carter needs to guard against potential Ultron problems.

jmundt33a

Should be during.my brief adventure. Either capitalize realm or remove the capital on mystic. Either Sanctum Mystic Realm or Sanctum mystic realm. Should be in front of me. Please limit the Exodus/Austin Powers tone. Should be normal entrances Maybe change out of to outside of mundane reality. Change box to treasure chest. Change before The System to to The System Do you mean fragments or signatures Remove are. Will be can stand on its own. Change the to my and end the sentence at Token. Once again, Exodus/Austin Powers tone is odd here. Change at to had. Should be had been horribly maimed I think change was to had or had been You have repairs and repaired in the same phrase. Maybe change repaired to restored? Change crumpled to crumbled Change assistance to existence. Still don’t like that use of before.

Detectivetrap23

“I heard the sound of a door opening, but luck was on my side for once” Good thing Carter picked the “chosen by fate, scaled off of luck stat” human evolution, he might’ve gotten caught otherwise. The system couldn’t finish its heist of itself this time but I’m sure it’ll send Carter a mission to finish the job eventually

Vorsayo

Oh god, I can’t wait to see the fallout from all this. So excited for tomorrow.

Marvin

Yeah, I hadn't expected to spend this much time away from Earth for this plot. Stuff on Earth might be a bit shorter than I'd like this book. We'll make up for it in book 6.

Indigo

Excellent chapter love how everything is coming together, hopefully we can get back to earth soon.

ArbabSB

Seems like her unearned growth will stall now that she can no longer exploit the captive System node to give her stats and abilities.

Marvin

Roughly the same level as the Goddess in Jade.

Tommy

Another interesting idea would be if he ended up being a fixer for the system. Help repair long lost nodes and such as he explores the multiverse.

James coe

Sounds like that mystic realm will soon get a system node using the brand new telly-repair man, we tellyport right to your computer no matter the state it's in

perfringens

Well, fast pacing isn't bad per say, I'd rather have that than the story drag on. What's a bit more annoying is Carter basically being the army of the dead sweeping the orcs out of the white city, meaning the only way I see to get tension over the shard like we had with the wolfman attack is to tie him up somewhere with a devil god or two, or throwing such a humongous amount of enemies he has to make difficult decisions about who to save :/ At least let Eowyn and the girls struggle a bit against mini bosses at that time ^^' Down bad for some more empire building, the military campaign scratch the itch a bit, but it'd be better if territorial gains could be made for the shard ... I genuinely can't remember his city's name at this point. :( Edit: Crownhill. Took me a handful of minute

jmundt33a

No memory transfer, but he got the others. Bratty Vaust is going to throw a hissyfit when she slows down enough to see what happened. What level is she at right now?

Swordcollector45

As said before the System is literally creating it's own architect to keep everything running smoothly instead of the bs like vaust tries, Carter also may be that architect dude from his body-soul upgrades reincarnation.

Chandler

I'm very excited to see if Carter ends up being in control of the System. However, a lot of the experiences are being rushed. The story is becoming more of an achievement list than a fleshed out storyline.

Adam

Nice bonus! What does the planetary system hub itself do? It seems like Carter will usurp the Vaust family.

ArbabSB

Thanks for the bonus chapter! This was great! Holy shit! Did Carter just rescue the Vaust's captive System mode? Sounds like the one-time data transfer is it escaping from the Vaust's hardware to Carter's Planetary System Hub. Can't wait to find out more. As an aside, I love how Carter realizes he can coerce the System into giving him better quest rewards. Yeah, Kindling Architect seems the most helpful given Carter's penchant for taking advantage of Earth's industrialized production processes and setting up interplanetary production lines for his designs. This will greatly improve what he can get his workers to make.

Corac

Awesome chapter

Sorahn

Something about this chapter is making me so excited to see what is coming!!!

Darius Sanguna

Seems like the System managed to escape successfully lol

Adam M.

BONUS!


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