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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 16:00:07 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

Thanks. Fixed. Somehow, that’s even worse. The Pocket Realm/Butler/Tutor/Bodyguard system for the upper crus in Glacia has huge holes. The institutionalized neglect of the Amazons on T is problematic, but at least good and caring mothers are significantly involved with their small clutches of daughters. God-King Poppa has such a large brood and so many responsibilities (when he’s not dodging them) that he isn’t really more than a concept, even to favored or promising children. Carter MUST do better than that.

ArbabSB

Myrina and Cyra are Herius's full sisters, not half-sisters. They share both parents.

Marcell Palmer

Love the chapter. Good to know the prince had a plan and wasn't just being flighty and scatterbrained. Also maybe the crew chief could be called Robert or Bob? Just a suggestion

SiI3nt

That's cool, can't wait to see the progression and Carter getting his VENGEANCE 🦇 towards the chaos wolf and serpent. If he goes that way

Marvin

I'm aiming to finish the series with something around 8-10. Maybe more if the series goes longer.

NovaZero

Robert Bobbinsworth Robington of Bobberia, The Third, of Mucaria. Aka Bob. Let's not skimp on the names, now.

Detectivetrap23

I can’t decide, is it funnier if the construction crew manager is sick of people calling him bob the builder (and that’s why he never told Carter his name) or if he has no idea who bob the builder is

James coe

Or a more subtle name like bobington or bobs worth, Robby bricksford

jmundt33a

That’s where she was assigned to go by her sect leader in her epilogue. Did she blow it off? Is she…is the Mundwise noblewoman her elaborate disguise? Thankfully, that’s incredibly unlikely. That would make what readers want in the future VERY awkward, at a minimum.

Marvin

She's from the Eternal Spring Sect, not the Black Beast Sect.

Marvin

Works well enough for me!

Matt Geller

When Carter finally gets back to Crownhill, the construction crew would really be beneficial in rebuilding and fortifying the cities now on his shard, a boon so to speak. The Jade Goddess appears to have her own agenda not inline with the sect, she may see the possibilities of the cultivator and system realms merging for the benefit of all.

Ens Ui

I second this!!!!

Andrew Foster

Can the construction crew managers name be Bob? So that way he’s Bob the builder.

René Zörnig

But is she not with the cultivator force or have I misread something?

Eloren Koori

I think Carter needs to throw his weight around. People telling him what they’re going to do in his mystic realm? He shouldn’t be such a pushover.

Marvin

We'll see her back in Crownhill, I think. The campaign arc is lasting a bit longer than I thought.

SiI3nt

I would like to say to perfect amount of women for cater would be, more than a squad (4) and less than a platoon (16 on the small end). Since, eloywn possibly and jade will be included along with reluna and possibly the cultivator girl, who knows what other "opportunities 😏" will happen

Liam

That is perfectly fine if the dwarfs are going to stay in Carter pocket full time name will make them more manageable, but if they stay there too long, he might need to intimate taxes for living in his pocket well and selling items. Thank you for the amazing chapter.

René Zörnig

Still curious when Jade will show up and what is truly her role

jmundt33a

Yeah. When I first read that I didn’t remember any ships. Then I recalled that one of the BB elders was testing and spreading that flying pagoda design.

jmundt33a

Particularly because Jade was ordered to support those yahoos for sect purposes.

ArbabSB

Hey, if it flies through space while carrying passengers, it's a spaceship.

ArbabSB

Huh. So when Carter goes back to Crownhill, is he going to take all the people who've put down roots in his mystic realm with him? Wonder what's next for the crusade. Blackhand's gonna come for the planetary hub once word of it spreads from the reports. And what are the Eternal Spring Sect and out Jade Goddess doing while the Black Beast Sect are getting their asses kicked?

jmundt33a

Surprise concluding consecutive sentences.

jmundt33a

Ships? You mean those weird, flying, inter dimensional pagodas? Yup. Herius is starting to sound like his youngest sister (without her almost Jackie Longbow transformation). That could be a problem. The Reepicheep obsession with derring-do I totally understand. However… “I just wish I knew what they were after. We could dig in around it for a more complete and effective defense.” Uh, yeah. You think it might be the System artifact your brother-in-law battled a Black Beast Elder for? That he’s mentioned to you three times including where he’s storing it?? Might that be important?


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