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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2025-02-22 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Vorsayo

That was a smart prediction in retrospect 😆

jmundt33a

I think she fits better than Reluna.

Marvin

It’s why most of the popular stuff is xuanhuan rather than xianxia. Xianxia is popular in China because it is based on Taoism, so they have shared cultural religious understanding we don’t. The western equivalent would be some story about being blessed by the abrahamic god and ascending to heaven.

Corac

I really don't see mimiko joining team Carter harem. Maybe a true subordinate though

Matt Geller

If the plan goes as Carter and the system AI hopes, being transferred to the new node, does it remain in Carters Mystic Realm or do they place it in a pocket Realm in Carters castle back on his Shard? Do they also let the AI have a name to go along with its own self awareness?

Matt Geller

I don’t know, but it appears to be pitting the Blackhand Cultivators against Velicia’s Heretica group, will we be throwing them against Valy Vaust as a diversion for the download of the Systems AI? All this in the week before he gets a time out being sent back to Crownhill. Pressure, pressure lol hopefully our little Oni doesn’t kill Mimiko before it even begins!!!

Vorsayo

Nope, he made a duplicate System Planetary Hub to act as a Trojan horse that he will “give up/sell” and when they take it and set it up at their facility it will be used to take over the facility, then it will be used to finalize the transfer of the system node, and free it. That is why he had to dirty up the “planetary hub” he had supposedly cleaned up.

Marvin

Uhh... surprise? I actually think I put it up like a month ago. I just forgot.

jmundt33a

Did you forget to mention that AA5 has a live preorder?

René Zörnig

Oh man he is in deep trouble ^^

Cynderick

Really enjoying the book so far and want to see Mimiko go back to earth with Carter and really hoping for her's and Reluna's first time with Carter

Cdonovan

I'm glad Carter won't be going all in on the cultivation stuff. Don't really care for it as it's too...abstract? Esoteric? Definitely prefer a more scientific and logical leveling system.

jmundt33a

First obviously is Velicia.

jmundt33a

So
proof positive that all these factions suck. And we know the gods on both sides of Order and Chaos suck. I have a couple questions now 1. Is it Xenia time with Velicia or are we settling for Lisette cubed? 2. Is Mimiko going to join the harem now (assuming she survives the next ten minutes)? Guiding and shaping her cultivation like this seems even more intimate than sexy time. This is the kind of intro and progression that Reluna has resisted so far.

jmundt33a

Maybe pull them all in, eliminate them and leave enough evidence to suggest the hub was destroyed?

perfringens

Prince Herius leaned over the prince's shoulder and whispered something in his ear. Insert Obama medal meme here

ArbabSB

I'm definitely appreciating Carter applying the scientific method to understanding cultivation because it's helping me, a total cultivation noob, follow what's going on without getting lost. "Carter, I'm back!"-RIP Mimiko. Was hoping she could follow Carter back to Crownhill but...well, at least she'll die having reached C-Grade. My theory of Lady Velicia being one of these "heretics" looking to build their own system was correct. Now as to Carter's plan: looks like he's trying to lure various factions in after his planetary system hub? Blackhand and these heretics. Dunno if he's planning to frame them for the theft of the system node, but that's the best I can come up with right now.

jmundt33a

Should be in anticipation of this moment Should be take care of themselves. Should be pleased with how Perhaps confident in my plan. To avoid repetition. Either pick Mimiko out of a crowd or Spot Mimiko in a crowd. Right now you have the two combined. Should be signature they held, there’s a double comma in the draft Should be crumble, not crumple Should be knock at the door.


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