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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 31

🕑 Added 2025-02-24 16:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Vorsayo

I suggested this as the plan as well in the previous chapters comments. Guess not, shame. Would have loved the see Vaust’s greed and arrogance lead to her taking the PSC back and it running it’s Trojan routine and ultimately cause her to lose control of the system node. Poetic justice in that I think.

Marvin

Missed this, but yes. Roughly halfway probably. It's 100k words or so. Might end up being slightly less than half way, it depends on how the story shapes up.

jmundt33a

Is this about the halfway point?

Andrew Mclain

Abbreviated spark notes, 3 words a sentence max!

jmundt33a

Agree to disagree.

Marvin

Marvin forgot! That’s how. Yes, it should be Master Artificer there.

jmundt33a

Doesn’t this make Reluna’s scorched earth approach exceptionally dicey?

Jim Payne

Man, I lost it, that was so good. I actually felt bad for Velicia… I’m kinda hoping she becomes a regular character at this point.

jmundt33a

Politically savvy, but if H wakes up and realizes Carter has to craft him a cover story, he probably will be personally embarrassed regardless of the ripples.

Matt Geller

I think Carter will help his brother in-law with some advice and secrecy, maybe he could say Herius was helping him uncover a threat to the realm with the heritics while also dealing with the cultivators. Everyone is happy and no embarrassment to the Samhain clan

horus scope

tbh i thought the plan was to trick them into stealing the fake (purposely dirty) one which is actually a trojan to transfer the AI, not necessarily to cover any tracks; i have a feeling everyone involved will be very clear on what happened by the end, he’s dealing openly afterall

SiI3nt

Nah, maybe in BIG BOLD AND ITALICIZED letters would and should do. He is beyond help with reading ques from women and that woman made her bed and so now she has to sleep in it with a prince that thinks with his second head quite often

jmundt33a

Maybe a Sparknotes version

EPS

Carter should gift the book on women to the Prince it sounds like he needs it

jmundt33a

I think the fact that I had room to ask about nepotism with Herius means the gag has been carried at least a little too far.

jmundt33a

How does she know he’s an Aethersmith? He only told her Master Artificer. Does Herius know? Is this pillow talk?

jmundt33a

Carter’s pillar thing? Said in the same tone as “The National Weather Service is calling for a big blizzard thing,” from the radio report in Groundhog Day. Does H pay attention to ANYTHING?? How did Kyrina get him this gig?

Matt Geller

Well it seems Velicia outplayed herself, hoisted on her own petard so to speak. Gives Carter a little more time for the plan to come together anyway.

jmundt33a

Personally? No. But a rising aspirant to his crown is such a gullible doofus rube? Secondhand embarrassment.

ArbabSB

Well, we don't know enough about Ted yet, but I get the feeling, given the size of his brood, he's not invested enough in Herius to consider the naive prince's actions an embarrassment to him personally.

jmundt33a

Packaged up? Shouldn’t it be packed up? As others have noted, it should be I felt her frustration and embarrassment. Should be getting a good deal. Should be its contents, not them. Should be she brought out. Should be going well. As Swordcollector mentioned, that should be Cyra.

jmundt33a

Also true and even more humiliating for the prince.

jmundt33a

Herius will be very lucky if Ted finds it hilarious. Things would get really bad if Ted saw this as embarrassing or galling.

Marvin

Probably 6-7 chapters. Idk yet, but that is my guess.

Marvin

Yes, it should say Cyra.

Justin Webb

Based on the technology Carter found in the ruins with the planetary hub, the golems on his shard might be related to a architect city. But who knows

ArbabSB

Given that Velicia is a member of the heretics, I wonder if she's even a native of this planet. She could be impersonating a dead noblewoman killed by the cultivators or a made up one that never existed at all.

Swordcollector45

Replace sakura in the sentence"Our classes are lagging a bit behind, but we won’t let Myrina and Sakura be the only B-Grades you have by your side.” with Cyra please as this is being said by sakura.

ArbabSB

I'm really looking forward to his reaction when he learns the truth about his girlfriend. If he ever does lol. I have a feeling daddy Ted would find this hilarious.

ArbabSB

Hahahahaha. System bless Herius. I thought him involving himself in the negotiations would make things harder for Carter (like he'd try to force Carter to give up the planetary hub for cheap), but he ended up completely neutering Velicia's ability to negotiate and bought Carter the time he needed. I can't wait to see Herius' reaction when he learns the truth about Velicia. If he does. So it seems the plan is indeed to lure the cultivators and heretics to the mystic realm and frame them for the theft or (more likely) destruction of the planetary hub containing the liberated system node. My question is how will Vaust know that the system node has gone to this planetary hub in a mystic realm? Does she have a way to trace the download? Liked the bonding moment with Sakura at the end. I'm glad he's still getting affectionate moments with the girls, but I hope Cyra gets some too. She still feels mostly like his colleague instead of, you know, his wife. I get she's in work mode, but still.

jmundt33a

Herius really REALLY needs guidance here, IF he survives.

Andrew Mclain

Great chappie pappy :)

jarret woods

When is Carter going back to crown Hill to renew the shard wars

jmundt33a

Module. Should be Making it happen


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