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New Gwen Suit Design & Test Comic Pages
🕑 Added 2022-08-24 08:41:51 +0000 UTCHeyo!
Been a while. All this time I've been fighting my own incompetency to make something decent looking.
Hope you like the new suit! I was trying to "modernize" it to feature in the comic that I want to make.
I also made 2 pages of what it might look like. It's not from an actual comic and there is no text. I was testing the waters with the style that I want to incorporate.
Tell me what you think about it!
The hardest part for me will probably be the writing, and not the art. Literally have no experience and I don't want to write just some dumb horny shit. Even though it will probably still end up that way.
Das it, for now, Thank you all as usual!
Comments
General Amador
My god I can’t believe I’m just seeing this. I absolutely love the redesigning you did to her suit. If they make a Spider Gwen 2099 comic, this would definitely need to be the suit. Bravo Guilty Bravo. 👏👏👏👏
Kay Bee Baby
This is a nice redesign, good art speaks for it self so don' worry too much over the dialogue.
Landon Franklin
Amazing work. Love the suit. When I first saw it I got Spider-Man PS4 vibes. The knuckles are very reminiscent of that game's suit.
Chupacabra King
can't wait to see the finished animation
mike hawk
Paterson is crashing when I try to view images 4 or 5
D-Kirby
Shit is dope, respectfully
David isBrosif
Looking Great!
TimeZero
Gwen looks smoking hot! For the dialogue, don't worry too much. Something light to go with the naughtyness is more than enough. 😁
PartyOn111
Writing wise. Some tips would be to look at erotica and find out what you like.
SPARK352
Gwen is the Cutest Hottie, maybe ever? 🤔😁👍
Guilty
Thank you for your feedback. I agree with pretty much everything. Of course I don't plan to make top level drama, but the funniness/wittiness still require some skill to pull off.
SPARK352
She's Gorgeous 🥰❤️ She is Magnificent filled with Cock 🤤🤤
Son of Odin
Don't worry if the comic's dialogue is cliched or silly, many of the best comic's are. And no offence intended, but I doubt anyone will be reading it expecting V for Vendetta or The Court of Owls level quality. Unless you're planning on making some more mainstream, SFW comics, or making comics a regular thing, I'd recommend using a hentai comic artist like Markydaysaid as a guide, and mostly keeping the dialogue funny and lighthearted. Most of the people who read it will be there for the smut, not the story.
