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Escapades Issue 5 - Page 4 - Sketch
🕑 Added 2020-06-12 03:08:32 +0000 UTCI've been waiting a looong time to depict a "why'd you stop?" "'cuz you said so!" "I didn't mean it!" moment, so it's nice to finally tick that off the list of WossyAer Moments™. :p
The SecretAery portion of this issue takes place in the living room, but once Wossy gets all maided up, it comes back to the bedroom here. With that in mind I'm still tweaking the contents/furniture in Sketchup and The Sims (such a useful game for character abode planning! ;) ) to get something that'll be dense, but also spacious enough for the both of them to get up to plenty of mischief. So for now, it's just an empty room with descriptions of what'll be inside.
Super fun montage of all the kinky fun W&A got up to throughout the week (instead of working), coming up next! ＼＼\(۶ ᐛ )۶//／／
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Wossa
She was panicking about the fact that they've slept in past noon instead of getting up early to work on renovating the shop. Wossy thinking it was playtime was just making matters worse, but I figured that Aer having to shout a Red acted like a 'reset' moment for both parties to stop everything and cool down, and now that Aer's finally got Wossy to listen to her, she's been able to recompose herself, wants to make sure Wossy is okay and knows that no boundaries were overstepped, and is about to explain why she was panicking. Like, her initial thought was "gotta get up!", and I coulda had her leap out of bed now that she's untied, but that would have been extra panels potentially spilling out into an extra page and I'm trying to avoid the opening of this issue being as drawn out and wordy as issue 4's was, so now she's just choosing to go straight to addressing the root of the problem in that they've actually been slacking off all week. That's the idea so far, at least. I'll get the next couple pages out as planned and then check back on this particular scene to tweak things to make it flow better. I might make her still be a little more antsy during that untying panel, like "It's okay, don't worry about it, just, listen-", or something like that. Hopefully it'll all flow nicely in the end, but thanks for bringing it up! Edit: Thinking about it some more, I could change her earlier panic dialogue from "we have to get to-" to something more like "it's already noon, we've wasted the entire morni-" so that her later calming down can be like a kind of "no sense crying over spilt milk, can't turn back the clock, but we need to address why this happened in the first place" progression.
KoFSMG
There seems to be a bit of a disconnect between the last page and this one though. Wasn't Aer in a hurry to do something - like go some where, it seemed?
