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My Bully is My Lover [Episode 5] - Public

🕑 Added 2021-09-13 16:00:19 +0000 UTC
My Bully is My Lover [Episode 5] - Public

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Honestly thought the first few chapters were pretty good and well written but man, did Episode 5 give my heart a giant tug I had never cried that much before, that episode confirmed that supporting the project is the right call incredible work. - P.S. That line when Emy said "Boys don't cry" got me cryin.

NiiChan

Thank you for such kind words, everyone! Your message sure reached my heart and that adds to my drive to keep pushing. Knowing that we're on a right track is a huge relief for me. I hope you keep on supporting the game, patreon or not. Love ya'll!

Mike

I've been reserving this chapter until today and it has ben wonderful. I mean, I've cried so much and it has been so emotional in a good way. I really hope Emma can have a happy ending and I'm longing for the next chapter.

After the fight, I am looking forward to the next plot, she is so pitiful and distressing...

Zhong Ping

... I started this game to fap. This episode was a major boner killer. No fapping happened. I loved it anyway. Good job.

Steven W.

Nice. Looking forward to seeing the 8 develop.

NiiChan

We only have 8 Li's. No more, no less. Others are sides.

Steven W.

I hope this didn't come across as too critical, I have really enjoyed your game so far. Just saying that even a Korean Drama limits itself to around 10 characters at most, to stay focused. I guess that Moon would work as an extra character that you may end up in a threesome sex scene with if you romance Lily. To make her a fully romanceable girl would be a bit much, IMHO.

Steven W.

As much as the "Korean Drama" approach works for this VN, to make us feel deep emotions, I do have a few points of criticism. First, I hope you don't make the mistake to introduce too many characters, because it'll mean that it will take forever until we get to the sexy scenes (each new character means we have to read through another dragged out backstory, which is an issue in many adult games). I am saying this especially as the Emma backstory was huge, and she is just one character. Stories with too many characters also tend to lose their narrative focus. Then, why do we get sexy pictures of the evil villain? The MC hasn't ever seen her, so he can't imagine her in sexy poses and those pictures don't make sense. Also it's creepy, because that evil woman has hurt so many people (and is even responsible for your father's death), so why would you imagine her pleasing you sexually? And the last sexy pic we got, of that young woman who has kicked down her stalker on the streets, seems unnecessary just as she seems to be an unnecessary character to the plot (we got 8 romanceable women already ...).

Riidher66776

Thank you for such a wonderful story, Even though much of it was heart-rending. It is filled with so much hope for the future and yet it is very much like real life because most love stories never reach fruition. I'm sure there isn't a dry eye anywhere, I know mine wasn't. Great job in portraying the paradox between duty and love.


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