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Danger Girl - Paradise Lost (Teaser)

🕑 Added 2018-03-06 08:50:01 +0000 UTC

Comments

Dashole

Will be well worth it! :-)

Dashole

Thanks for the excellent feedback, DK! Bridging that narrative gap in Ch 1 was exactly what I was going for with the bonus gallery. I definitely wanted to show more of Abbey's fall and the lengths she would go to to protect herself and her child in the New World Order. :-)

Can't wait!

Guy

The bonus art was great! It would have been cool having a longer chapter 1 with all or some of that incorporated but this still fantastically accomplishes filling in the time gap between page 6 & 7 in a way that doesn't drag the story out. I think the wedding scene and Abbey laying awake in bed are especially great in capturing the situation she's trapped in, just as the scene with the Peach groping her while she does dishes.

Dashole

That's actually GREAT to hear, SP. I don't think we ever talked about how you felt about the galleries. I really wish I ordered more Ch 1 pages from you. But then, we didn't know how the project would take off back then. :-)

Studio Pirrate

I sure did :P

Dashole

That's really great to hear man! SP and I are having a blast creating the rest! You won't be disappointed! Out of curiosity, if you enjoyed the Ch 1 ending, did you enjoy Abbey's bonus art gallery? I commissioned those pieces to flesh out her story behind-the-scenes. :-)