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TUGB3 [Wip#21] Useless archer

🕑 Added 2019-01-11 11:39:25 +0000 UTC

Comments

Lancelot

right. I rather wait several more months and have a quality comic, than have a comic in next day but poor quality ( Sad trouble of Rome 2 Total War). I believe everyone think as same as me,too.

Thelewdcookie

Me too man , i'm trying my best to finish the comic on time .

Thelewdcookie

Thanks for the feedbacks man , glad u liked the new pose .

Lancelot

Hope we will have new comic at the end of February. ^^

ayase

I think updated version is better. Looks like the elf girl unwittingly step backwards a bit out of the shock and fear. Maybe caused by witnessing those meat shields? Or perhaps the face hugged lady on the left is creating some uncomfortable moaning sounds, makes her realised that they are fucked, and she’s going to be the next. Nice touch in details such as this gives reader like me more room for imagination, hence makes it more enjoyable to read.

Thelewdcookie

Well i adjusted the pose to make it more natural , atleast for me . What u guys think ?

Thelewdcookie

Indeed , Oh the girl is leaking ? worries not them gobs can fix the issue with their D .

Thelewdcookie

Indeed , still need to make the pose and the expression looks more natural

tangzhongtan

Not helpless，it's hopeless.Sorry

tangzhongtan

The elf archer use one hand to cover her face，which express full of fear. Her eyes could be more helplessᵒ̴̶̷̤😍ᵒ̴̶̷̤

M´ s Den of Lust and Desire

Being a filthy gobbo, I still find peing disgusting. Other than that, is the one gobbo really jumping onto the heroines face? Wow! Nice move! The archer may have surrendered but there is a point in her not shooting. As a punishment for peing herself she shall be punished even more.

Thelewdcookie

Well she's so scared and shocked after seeing what them gobs did to those poor girls and now has lost the apility to fight . But we can always remove those arrows to make the situation even more hopeless .

Lancelot

I think the scene which Archer just stand there and keep silent is strange. She still have bow and arrows. If she used all of arrows, or her bow be broken, we can understand why she feel hopeless and stop fighting. However, stop fighting while still have weapon to fight, it look so strange, and difficult to understand her thinking.