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Surprise(42 pages)
🕑 Added 2017-07-11 18:35:22 +0000 UTC https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzxIo3WeTaQBOU5taVB3QkZUeVU?usp=sharingSorry for the long delay......
I was just too busy last month. Although I finished the render, I don't have time to edit them and add conversations.
Besides, forgive my poor English. I still have to learn to write oral English...
中文版还需再等待一下，来这里的也应该基本能看懂英文，都是最低级的英语……
Comments
YT_snow
It's on Pixiv now.
Deathy
what happened to the story, there is nothing
Rasalgheti
this is by far your most outstanding work. Now that you tie up with "the breakout" it's almost perfect. You know you should do a little back up about this one, like somekind prequel, for example, where did the girls get the gun? did they use it in someone before? it is an alien artifact? i don't know but the premise is so fun and lovely that you should try to explore in the future more about it. Whatever you're a genius man! I will never get tired of say it.
Gwendaline Devine
unique story, really enjoyed it
YT_snow
I'll message you next time
YT_snow
Oh thank you
Himesama
Message me, and I'll see if I can proof-read your English text.
88l00fdaeD
What a twist 😱
