Sean Archer
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Critic's Corner! (Критики пост!)
🕑 Added 2024-11-26 11:32:23 +0000 UTCПримечание: текст на английском, если автор фото иностранец. Если автор русскоязычный, то и разбор будет на русском, конечно)
Our fellow photographer, Milan, sent his last photos for Critic's Corner. And look at this, it's a pretty good and confident job! Problems? Composition.
a) I believe you have to focus more on the model. And here we have two bright lamps in the background. Why? That distracts us from model's face, it's too dark.
b) Too much empty space on the left, model is falling out from the frame.
c) The same problem. Too much empty space on the right, model is falling out from the frame.
d) Composition again.
e) Again.
f) Let's try more cinematic crop here. Before:
g) And again, we can focus more on the model, less empty space on the left.
