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The Island - Comic Script
🕑 Added 2021-11-29 19:34:03 +0000 UTCHey everybody! I thought you might find this interesting now that 'The Island' is done. This is what the script looks like for a comic, in case you were curious - obviously sometimes I fuse pages or change things if it doesn't work out the way I imagined it, but you can see how writing a comic can be complicated since you have to envision each panel as you go!
Page 1
Panel 1
Wide angle, DAVID, a brown horse, is laying down on the beach. High angle, looking down at him slightly sideways.
Panel 2
Close up, he looks slightly peaceful, eyes closed.
Panel 3
Close up of his eyes, they open.
Panel 4
He sits up forcefully, looking away from us.
David: *gasp*
Panel 5
Shoulder close up of him looking wildly past us, wind blowing in his mane.
Panel 6
Wide angle, huge landscape helicopter view of the strange island. Written in the water in white foam is ’The Island’
David: Where am I?
Page 2
Panel 1
David’s rising to his hooves, distant shot.
Panel 2
Medium close, showing that he’s naked. David is looking down at himself, unnerved, reflexively partially covering himself with one hand.
David: The hell?
Panel 3
Cowboy medium, David calling out with both hands around his mouth.
David: Hello?!
Panel 4
Logan: Hey!
David is turning around to look behind him, in our direction, surprised at the voice.
Panel 5
We see what he sees - a black stallion with grey spots walking towards us, also naked - David’s shoulder and surprised face are in the ultra foreground.
Panel 6
Close up of David’s face - he’s angry.
David: you!
Panel 7
The two of them in the panel, David aggressively looking up at him and pointing, Logan looking irritated.
David: Logan! I suppose this is some kind of joke you’re pulling!
Logan: Trust me David, I never wanted to see you again.
Page 3 (6 panels)
Panel 1
Medium close of Logan, averting his eyes up and away.
Logan: Especially not… this much of you.
Panel 2
Close up of David.
David: Fuck you! What is this anyway?
Wider angle, both of them, Logan throwing his arms out to the side. David’s eyes are wide, stunned, losing his anger.
Logan: Do I Look like I know? I woke up here buck-ass naked just like you!
David: So, you didn’t plan this?
Logan: Honestly, does this look like something I’d do?
Panel 3
Close up of Logan, sneering.
Logan: You think it’s been my lifelong dream to see your little pecker?
Panel 4
Close up of David’s eyes, looking down and away.
David: Okay, shut up.
Panel 5
Wide angle, both of them facing out into the ocean.
David: Where the hell are we?
Logan: Beats me. No mainland or other islands in sight.
Panel 6
Side view, Logan has turned back to the center of the island, considering. David is looking at him, ultra foreground, back to us, chest still facing the ocean.
Logan: Something’s funny here, too.
David: What do you mean?
Page 4
Panel 1
Low angle, focusing on the island but the shot is framed by both of their butts.
Logan: This island. It seems a little too… perfect.
Panel 2
Head level of the two of them.
David: I see what you mean. That tree exactly in the middle…
Panel 3
Closer shot of the tree - there’s something next to it.
David: Wait - what’s that?
Panel 4
Close up, there’s four apples on the altar and two water bottles.
Logan: You’ve gotta be fucking kidding me.
Panel 5
From slightly behind them, David pointing at the tree - there’s something written on it.
David: Look! There!
Panel 6
Close up, it’s a message scratched in the bark.
The Key lies within
and within
Page 5
Panel 1
looking back at the two of them - David is closer to the tree, both of them looking at it, just over our shoulder.
Logan: The hell does that mean?
David: No clue.
Panel 2
Medium close, slightly lower angle of David, looking back towards the ocean.
David: But I’m starting to get an idea of where we are.
Panel 3
Wider angle, David jogging to the beach, Logan, surprised, turning after him.
Logan: What? Hey, wait up!
Panel 4
David is striding into the water. Logan is jogging after him in the background.
Logan: Where are you going! You can’t swim, moron, there’s nowhere to go!
Panel 5
Medium shot of David, water up to his middle thighs, reaching out with his right hand.
David: Just shut up, asshole!
Panel 6
Over his shoulder, his hand has pressed against something.
sfx: thunk.
David: There.
Page 6
Panel 1
Medium of Logan, calling to David from the beach.
Logan: Hey! David! What’re you doing?
Panel 2
David has turned towards Logan and is pounding his fist on the invisible wall.
David: Dude, you blind?
sfx: dnk dnk dnk dnk
Panel 3
Close up of Logan.
Logan: Woah.
Panel 4
Looking over Logan’s shoulder as David exits the water.
David: So tell me: where do you think we are?
Panel 5
High angle of the two of them, looking around suspiciously.
Logan: a… a prison.
Page 7
Panel 1
Time has passed - it’s evening. They’re sitting on the beach together, facing one another, the apples and water bottles next to them.
Wide angle.
Logan: How did you get here? Do you remember?
David: No.
Logan: All I remember is…. having some supper last night.
David: Same, actually.
Panel 2
David: You didn’t have some honey with you that would’ve noticed you being kidnapped?
Panel 3
Logan medium close
Logan: No, I’m single.
Panel 4
Medium close of David
David: Good.
Panel 5
Medium of Logan, looking up fiercely.
Logan: The fuck do you mean, ‘good?’
Panel 6
Medium wide of the two of them.
David: You fucking scared Sharon off trying to steal her from me, so yeah, good!
Logan: That was High School!
David: First and only girlfriend I’ve ever had, asshole!
Logan: (muttering) 5 year old.
Page 8
Panel 1
Wide angle, they’re sitting looking away from each other.
Panel 2
Lower angle, David is standing up, his groin in full view of Logan, who’s looking.
David: Well this is a great time.
Panel 3
Logan, smiling in a snotty way.
Logan: You know, it’s funny - after a while of being naked you get used to it.
Logan: I mean, your junk doesn’t make me wanna gag nearly as much as before -
Panel 4
David’s hoof is clocking Logan across the mouth.
sfx: clomp!
Wide angle, Logan is holding his mouth, David is standing in a wider, aggressive stance, finished with his kick and staring Logan down.
Panel 5
Close up of Logan holding his nose, blood between his fingers and tears in his eyes, angry.
Panel 6
Over Logan’s shoulder, David has turned and is walking away.
Page 9
Panel 1
It’s completely dark, looking down at David’s face as he sleeps on the beach.
Panel 2
A little closer to him.
sfx: beep beep
Panel 3
Even closer, his eyes have opened, frowning.
sfx: beep beep
David: what the?
Panel 4
David sits up, looking to his right.
Panel 5
Wide angle, Logan is a little ways away, laying on his back, his penis out and fully hard, sound asleep.
Panel 6
David looks down at himself and finds that he’s fully hard too.
David: Damn wet dreams…
Page 10
Panel 1
Wider view, looking up at the sky - something is floating towards them on a parachute. it has a red light on it.
sfx (by object): beep beep
Panel 2
aerial view, the object is in the foreground top right, Logan and David in the mid background, Both sitting up, only David looking at it.
David: Logan! Wake up!
Logan: Wha? What?
Panel 3
The object has landed closer to Logan - he’s just barely in the shot.
Panel 4
Medium shot, Logan has sat up, his penis sticking out awkwardly. David has walked over - his boner is jutting out too.
David: What do you think it is?
Panel 5
Side view, Logan looking at David’s dick jutting out towards his face.
Logan: Um dude, can you quit… showing off?
Panel 6
Low angle view of David, looking down at Logan dismissively.
David: Shove it - you know how it is.
Page 11
Panel 1
Close up of the object - it’s a chest and it’s popped open. Inside is a note.
sfx: pop
Panel 2
Ultra close up. The note says ‘Kiss.’
Panel 3
Low angle of the two of them both looking down at the note incredulously.
both: the fuck?
Panel 4
Wide angle of the two of them, still sporting somewhat hard cocks, staring at each other.
Panel 5
Logan gets up. David is surprised at his sudden movement - he’s turned to go to the water, cock swinging.
Logan: Well, fuck that.
Logan: I’m gonna cool off this stupid hardon.
Page 12
Panel 1
View from David’s right shoulder as Logan walks off towards the water.
David: Um, Logan?
Panel 2
Logan is waist deep in the water.
Logan: Come on, go down.
Panel 3
Close up low dramatic angle of David, up on his knees, looking out at the ocean.
David: *gasp*
Panel 4
Behind Logan, he’s looking down, not seeing the shark fin accelerating towards him.
Panel 5
David on his feet, shouting at Logan.
David: FUCK! Logan, MOVE!
Panel 6
Logan looks up wildly, seeing the shark fin.
Page 13
Panel 1
huge dramatic shot, David has grabbed Logan by his mane and yanked him back towards the shore - the shark fin has turned.
Logan: Aaagh!
Panel 2
They’ve plopped down onto the sand.
sfx: Plumf
Logan: Ow!
Panel 3
View from above them, Logan is laying down flat, partially on top of David, holding the back of his head. David is looking at the ocean, scared.
Logan: Fucking hell!
David: Shit.
Logan: What!
Panel 4
View from behind them, they’re looking out at the ocean, and it’s full of shark fins.
Panel 5
Same angle but from the other side, looking at the two of them. They’re staring out at the ocean, not seeing the glowing eyes in the darkness behind them.
Logan: What the fuck is going on?
sfx: grrrr
Page 14
Panel 1
High angle, looking over the shoulders of a monstrous beast of shadow rising up into the bottom of the frame.
Panel 2
Low dramatic angle, the two of them right next to each other, cowering in the shadow of a massive muscular beast, arms spread wide, eyes shining.
sfx: graaaaaarrr!
Panel 3
Close up of the two of them. Logan is frozen, staring up at the monster mouth agape. David is grabbing his face determinedly.
Logan: Oh god-
Panel 4
Close up of the two of their faces, David smashing his lips into Logan’s with his eyes closed, Logan’s eyes frozen open.
Page 15
Panel 1
Epic full body shot, David’s eyes are closed.
Panel 2
Same shot, David’s eyes are open and he’s squinting up at where the monster was.
Panel 3
Over their shoulders, looking at where the monster was.
David: It’s gone.
Panel 4
Shot of the ocean - it’s clear.
David: No more sharks either.
Panel 5
Close up of their groins, their dicks overlapping.
Logan: Good. Now can you please get your dick off of mine?
Page 16
Panel 1
Logan stands up and walks away. His back to us, David still kneeling.
David: Sorry.
Panel 2
Close up of Logan, staring out into the sea, wistful distress on his face.
Panel 3
Medium close up of David, touching his fingers to his lips.
Panel 4
View from Logan’s front, David has risen and is walking towards him.
Panel 5
Wide view, from behind the two of them.
Panel 6
Same angle.
David: I’m sorry I kicked your face.
Page 17
Panel 1
Side view, Logan glancing at David.
Panel 2
Same angle, he’s looking forward again, David glancing at him.
Logan: I’m sorry I called your junk disgusting. It’s not.
Panel 3
Front view of the both of them.
David: Maybe… we shouldn’t sleep so far away from each other. Just in case something happens.
Logan: Good idea.
Panel 4
Side view slight dutch angle of them crouching to lie down.
Panel 5
Aerial view of the two of them, their backs to each other.
Page 18
Panel 1
Close up of Logan, his eyes closed.
Panel 2
Close up of David, his eyes lidded, glancing down.
Panel 3
Close up of their hips. Logan has reached back and put his hand on David’s hip joint. A gesture of simple intimacy.
Panel 4
Close up of David, slight smile.
Panel 5
David’s placed his hand on top of Logan’s.
Panel 6
Large aerial shot.
Page 19
Panel 1
Close up of the altar by the tree. It doesn’t have anything on it.
Logan: Well shit.
Panel 2
Low angle of the two horses looking down at the altar, arms crossed.
Logan: The perverts didn’t give us any more food.
Panel 3
Side view, both of them have their ears perked up.
sfx: brrrrrrrrrrr
Panel 4
Close up of the altar - something is rising up through the stone at the center, like a hologram.
Panel 5
Close up. It’s a note. On it is written: touch.
Panel 6
Close up of Logan’s face, he’s rolling his eyes.
Logan: Good fucking grief.
Page 20
Panel 1
Side view, Logan’s shoulder in ultra foreground, David focus, looking at Logan askance.
David: What?
Logan: Well, now that we know what kind of stuff they want-
Panel 2
Logan reaches out and touches David’s sheath.
Panel 3
Chest up of the two of them, David is looking down at David’s hand.
David: Umm.. Little forward there aren’t ya?
Panel 4
Close up of Logan’s face.
Logan: Look, I’m hungry, and they probably won’t give us any food until we do what they want, so hurry up and grab mine and get this over with.
Panel 5
Close up of David, looking uncertainly down at Logan’s junk.
David: Um… okay.
Panel 6
Close up of their groins. Logan has his hand wrapped around David’s mostly soft sheath, and David’s hand is reaching for Logan’s emerging cock - just the bud is out.
Page 21
Panel 1
Semi aerial view of the two of them awkwardly standing there.
David: This is weird.
Logan: At least compliment my handjob skills.
David: okay: you give great handjobs.
Panel 2
Close up of their groins - they’re both hard, still jacking.
Logan: You’re hard.
David: So are you.
Panel 3
Both their faces.
David: So do you-?
Logan: No.
Panel 4
Close of Logan looking down, mollified.
Logan: Just…
Panel 5
High angle of their cocks, He’s squeezing David’s cockhead.
Logan: handjob’s a handjob, I guess.
Page 22
Panel 1
Focus on David, he’s looking at the altar.
David: Hey.
Panel 2
over their shoulders high angle, the altar has their food and water on it.
Panel 3
Fuller body, they’re just letting go of each other’s penises.
David: I guess we can-
Logan: Yeah -
Panel 4
Medium shot, the two of them have picked up their food and water.
Panel 5
Lower angle in front as they walk, their boners awkwardly bouncing.
David: Hey, Logan?
Logan: Hm?
David: You kinda do give a good handjob.
Logan: Dude.
Page 23
Panel 1
It’s evening, they’re sitting facing each other on the beach.
Logan: That was not enough fucking food.
David: I know.
Logan: What is the plan here, anyway? What do these sick fucks want?
Panel 2
Medium close of David.
David: Maybe they’re making a porno!
Panel 3
Close up of Logan.
Logan :*Snort* well screw that. I’m not touching your dick again.
Panel 4
David looks slightly hurt.
David: Is it really that bad?
Panel 5
Side view both of them.
Logan: You - you liked it?
David: No! Well, I mean… I’m just thinking that they might give us more food.
Panel 6
Logan looks slightly crestfallen.
Logan: Oh. Yeah. Sure.
Panel 7
Close up David
David: Sure?
Page 24
Panel 1
Close up David
David: Sure?
Panel 2
Wide angle shot, Logan has leaned back slightly and his soft cock is emerging.
Logan: Sure, go ahead. Whatever.
Panel 3
Side angle low, Logan and his cock in foreground, David approaching at a crouch.
Panel 4
The two of them kneeling in front of each other, David grabbing Logan’s cock, Logan slowly reaching for David’s.
Panel 5
Close up of their hands stroking their cocks, pulling them up in an x.
Panel 6
Stomach up, both of them looking over our heads.
Logan: Anything?
Panel 7
On the other side of them, we see what they’re looking at with them in the foreground: the altar is there, empty.
David: nope.
Panel 8
David is leaning in towards the tip of Logan’s cock, eyes still on the altar - Logan looks surprised.
David: I’m gonna try something.
Logan: what-
Page 25
Panel 1
Dutch angle, Logan is still holding David’s penis, David is sucking his cock.
Logan: David!
Panel 2
Close up of David sucking his cock.
David: Hmmmrg nnng?
Panel 3
Close up of Logan, still shocked.
Logan: What?
Panel 4
Lower angle, David pulling off of Logan’s cock.
sfx: slurp
David: How ‘bout now?
Panel 5
Close up of the altar. It has more food on it.
Logan: Fuck, you were right.
David: ‘Guess that settles it.
Logan: Meaning…
Panel 6
David is leaning back like Ron Jeremy, his cock jutting out invitingly.
David: See if they’ll give us more.
Panel 7
Looking down the barrel of David’s cock, pointing at Logan’s face like a gun. Logan is in a dazed state.
Page 26
Panel 1
Side view of Logan leaning down towards David’s cock with trepidation.
Panel 2
He’s opened his mouth, his tongue barely touching the tip as he opens.
Panel 3
Medium view of him going down on David.
David: hmmm.
Panel 4
Closer view, Logan looks distressed as he sucks.
Panel 5
His eyes close and he relaxes.
Panel 6
Side medium, he swallows 3/4 of David’s cock.
David: ohhhh wow!
Page 27
Panel 1
David lies down, Logan is following, David’s cockhead still in his mouth, looking at David out of the corner of his eye.
David: C’mere.
Panel 2
Logan swings his leg over David’s head, his cock dangling down, David grabbing the base of his cock.
Panel 3
Side view of the two of them 69ing
Panel 4
Close up of Logan. He’s gone all the way to the root, his eyes closed, lost in the act.
Panel 5
David has his mouth partially open off of Logan’s cockhead and is swirling his tongue over Logan’s cockhead.
Page 28
Panel 1
Logan’s butt, David’s hands on his hips.
Panel 2
The altar has tons of food and water on it, piling up.
sfx: brrrrrrrrrrrrr
Panel 3
Upside-down look at David’s face. He’s pondering something even as there’s a cock in his mouth.
Panel 4
We see what he sees - Logan’s ass.
Panel 5
Close up of David - halfway down Logan’s cock but trying to talk.
David: Mmmmf! Mmm!
Panel 6
Close up of Logan, pulling off of David’s cock and looking back worriedly.
sfx: slurp
Logan: Guh! what? You okay?
Panel 7
Logan has laid down on his side, David is sitting up wiping his lips.
David: *Huff* I figured it out! The riddle!
Logan: The… what?
Page 29
Panel 1
Close up of the riddle on the tree.
David: The riddle on the tree! The key lies within and within!
Medium, Logan’s back slightly to us, focus david.
David: Well… I think It means they’ll let us go…
Panel 2
Close up of Logan’s butt - David is putting his hand on it.
David: If we…
Panel 3
Medium shot of the two of them, Logan yelling.
Logan: Hell no!
David: But -
Logan: You - why would it be ME? You’re smaller!
Panel 4
Medium close of David
David: Well, I figured if I’m smaller, then it wouldn’t be as big a deal for you; I mean, maybe it wouldn’t be so uncomfortable?
Panel 5
Over their heads, the altar in the center. The altar is surrounded by apples that have fallen as their rewards. But a big bottle of lube has risen up, knocking more apples aside.
Panel 6
Close up of the bottle, Logan’s fist snatching it.
Panel 7
Low angle action shot, Logan throwing the bottle out into the ocean.
Logan: Raaaah!
Page 30
Panel 1
Shot of the ocean as the bottle of lube zooms out and lands in the water
sfx: sploosh
Panel 2
Aerial view, David has gotten to his feet and is in a wary stance as Logan screams at the sky.
Logan: FUCK YOU!
Panel 3
Logan is running 3/4 towards us, towards the water, tears in his eyes.
Logan: I’m not playing anymore! It’s not gonna be like that! Let me out!!
Panel 4
He splashes into the water, David running after him.
David: Logan!
Panel 5
Side view of Logan pounding his fist on the invisible wall.
Logan: It - wasn’t - supposed - to - be - this - way!
sfx: bam bam bam bam bam
Panel 6
View from behind, David foreground, Logan background.
Page 31
Panel 1
Close up of David.
David: Are you in on this?
Panel 2
Cowboy medium of Logan whirling to look at David in horror, tears still in his eyes.
Logan: Oh god no Dave!
David: Dave?
Logan: I -
Panel 3
Inset close up, Logan looking down and away, more tears coming.
Logan: I like you. I always have.
Panel 4
Side angle of both.
David: You mean, as in-
Logan: YES!
Panel 5
Close up of David
David: But - you were always trying to steal Sharon from me!
Panel 6
Medium close of Logan
Logan: I was jealous, okay! I wanted you, but I knew you didn’t want me, you only wanted her. God, I can’t explain, I was just a stupid kid!
Page 32
Panel 1
Further away shot of Logan
Logan: I just figured I might have a chance if she wasn’t yours anymore.
Panel 2
Closeup of David, stunned.
David: Logan, I-
Panel 3
sfx: SNAP
Panel 4
Aerial view - the island is still there, but there is now just a grey box that they’re in instead of ocean and sky.
Panel 5
Low angle view from their left side, looking up - there’s a viewing room built into the wall, with two scientists in lab coats. One’s an older cougar, and the other is a Fennec.
Cougar (burst): GOD FUCKING DAMN IT!
Page 33
Panel 1
Inset of a drain in the floor, the ocean water rapidly draining into it
sfx: whshhhhhh
Panel 2
Medium of the window, the cougar is screaming at the Fennec.
Cougar: He’s GAY?! HOW THE FUCK DID YOU NOT FIND THIS OUT!
Fennec: He put heterosexual on -
Cougar: And people ALWAYS tell the truth on forms?
Panel 3
Slight aerial view of the two horses, looking completely flabbergasted.
Fennec: No, but-
Cougar: The whole experiment is ruined! Research was your JOB!
Panel 4
Closer view, Logan shouting up at the window.
Logan: Excuse me!
Panel 5
Look at the window, with the two horses’ heads in the foreground.
The two scientists have frozen in their argumentative positions and have turned their heads to look.
Logan: What the fuck is going on here?
Panel 6
Medium of the Cougar, he’s leaned in and is yelling back.
Cougar: Yeah yeah, you’ve been participating in an experiment to see if a straight man will fall in love with another man under the right circumstances.
Cougar: But SOME moron fucked it all up, ‘cause you were already in love with him.
Page 34
Panel 1
Aerial shot of the room, straight on. A door in the wall opens up.
sfx: shoop
Cougar: Your things are in there. You’re free to go.
Panel 2
Close up of David.
David: What gives you the right to kidnap us like this!
Panel 3
The cougar looks down at them skeptically.
Cougar: We didn’t. You filled out a form to participate in a psychological study for $500 a day, didn’t you?
Panel 4
The two look at each other.
David: Well… now that you mention it…
Panel 5
Same angle, but they’ve turned back to the window.
Logan: But that doesn’t give you the right to take us without our knowledge!
Panel 6
Faraway angle of the window. The cougar looks bored.
Cougar: Didn’t do that either. When you arrived we gave you a sedative, with your consent, that erases your short term memory. You’ll receive a check in the mail in a week or so.
Panel 7
Exact same shot, the window area has gone black, the lights off.
sfx: click.
Page 35
Panel 1
Logan shouting foreground.
Logan: Hey! You get back here so I can knock your teeth in!
Panel 2
Same angle as before, window is still blank.
David: Logan. I think we should go.
Panel 3
Logan storming off through the door, David following him.
Panel 4
David stands at the doorway, looking back at the Island. The island is in foreground.
Page 36
Panel 1
They’re outside standing by a parking lot, fully clothed. They’re not sure what to do, not looking at each other.
David: So…
Panel 2
Close up of David, looking down sheepishly.
David: You really like me?
Panel 3
Logan walking away, David is surprised.
Panel 4
Logan foreground, looking determinedly down, still furious.
Page 37
Panel 1
Establishing shot of David’s house.
Panel 2
David has arrived in his foyer. His phone is buzzing.
sfx: bzz
Panel 3
Medium shot of him holding his phone.
Panel 4
Our view of his phone. On it is written (message request from Logan Dirk) Accept Decline
Panel 5
Close up of David’s face. He’s mildly confused and a little sad.
Panel 6
Close up of David’s thumb as he presses the accept button.
Panel 7
Close up of the text: I’m sorry I ran off. Can we talk?
Page 38
Panel 1
Upper floor of an apartment complex in the city.
Panel 2
The two of them are sitting in the living area, one on a couch and the other on a chair.
David: So, you never answered the question.
Logan: What question?
David: You really like me?
Panel 3
Close up of Logan.
Logan: Heh. I guess.
David: Hmm.
Panel 5
Medium of both of them, Logan gesturing at David. David’s laughing.
Logan: You know… it’s weird now, seeing you with clothes on.
David: Ha! I know what you mean.
Page 39
Panel 1
Medium wide of both of them, awkwardly silent.
Logan: Uh… Hrrm.
Panel 2
Medium of David.
David: Want me to come over there?
Panel 3
Close up of Logan nodding.
sfx: nod
Panel 4
Low angle, David on his feet, coming closer.
Panel 5
David sits down next to Logan.
Panel 6
Close up, the two of them touch their lips together, still somewhat in profile to each other.
Page 40
Panel 1
They’ve turned towards each other, knees touching, Kissing passionately.
Panel 2
Ultra close of the two of them.
Logan: It’s different when it’s real.
David: let’s see what else is different.
Panel 3
Close view Logan ultra foreground, Looking up at David as he stands over him, grabbing Logan’s pants.
Panel 4
Side view, He’s pulling Logan’s pants completely off, freeing Logan’s cock
Page 41
Panel 1
David has pulled his pants off, Logan is watching him sheepishly.
Panel 2
David gets on Logan’s lap, taking his shirt off.
Panel 3
Close up of their kiss.
Panel 4
Close up of their cocks
Panel 5
Close up of Logan taking David’s penis in his mouth.
Panel 6
Wide angle shot of logan giving him a blowjob.
Page 42
Panel 1
Looking down at Logan sucking.
Panel 2
Looking up at David.
David: Mmmf. You’re good.
Panel 3
Logan pulls off slightly, close up.
Logan: I’ve got practice - sucking myself off.
Panel 4
David laughing
David: Ha! The joys of being a horse!
Panel 5
Logan has continued to suck, close up, looking up at David with smiling eyes.
Panel 6
David and logan, dutch angle, David sweetly holding Logan’s cheeks as Logan sucks.
David: Logan. When it’s time… could I be on top?
Page 43
Panel 1
Close up of Logan, looking up at David trustingly.
Logan: mm hmm
Panel 2
David steps back onto the floor. Logan looks surprised.
Logan: What, now?
David: I can’t wait. Please?
Panel 3
Logan getting to his knees on the couch and raising his tail.
Logan: Just… go slow?
Panel 4
Lower angle side, David approaching, holding his penis and lining it up, Logan looking back at him trustingly.
David: Dont’ worry.
Panel 5
Close up of his cockhead pressing against Logan’s asshole
Panel 6
Close up of Logan’s face, closing his eyes.
Panel 7
Close up of his cockhead slipping in.
Page 44
Panel 1
Side view, David’s halfway in.
Logan: Ohhhhhgod.
Panel 2
From front, Logan’s face in ultra foreground.
David: you good?
Logan: *grunt* yeah.
Panel 3
From underneath, it’s clear that David is balls deep now.
Logan: God you’re big.
Panel 4
Close up low angle of David smiling down at Logan.
Page 45
Panel 1
David’s view of Logan’s back as he humps into him.
Panel 2
Close up of David’s face
David: You’re so hot!
Panel 3
View of the pair of them together.
Panel 4
Side view close up of David’s cock almost all the way out.
Panel 5
Close up same angle 3/4 of the way in.
Logan: Mmmgh!
Page 46
Panel 1
Logan’s cock squirting onto the sofa.
Logan: Ughh!
Panel 2
Close up David’s face, contorted in orgasm.
David: Oh god!
Panel 3
Side view, he’s buried balls deep, cum squirting out.
David: hahh!
Panel 4
Wide view, David leaning over Logan’s back, keeping himself inside, Logan looking dazedly back at him.
David: *huff* *huff* sorry I didn’t last long.
Logan: *hah* perfect for a first time.
Panel 5
Close up of their faces.
David: Perfect?
Logan: Yes.
Panel 6
Ultra close of Logan’s face, looking down and to the side.
Logan: Fuck those scientists though.
Page 47
Panel 1
Close up of David’s face, laughing.
David: ha!
Panel 2
Close up of David’s cock slipping out of Logan’s butt.
Panel 3
David is laying down on top of Logan, face to face.
David: Don’t blame them too much, though.
Panel 5
Close up of the two of them, David resting his head on Logan’s chest.
David: That island was the best thing that’s ever happened to me.
Logan: Me too.
Panel 6
Establishing shot, the sun has set, still with warm colors in the sky, stars coming out.
The end (written in stars)
