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[cutE] Storyboard Page 11-20 (GER/ENG)
🕑 Added 2018-10-19 14:59:54 +0000 UTC And here's the rest of the storyboard, pages 11-20.German: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/7zjp8kv7ciyw31y/AAA_fdiAnYKFHv-JKRcz2Va9a?dl=0
English: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/z926rkdoso3ajka/AADchsd-sqUY5ER-uKSFL9Gha?dl=0
I hope that gives you a nice introduction to get a better feeling of the characters than just seeing random scribbles of them :) Now you know a little bit more of Julian, Phil (+friends), Marlon and Wolf.
Thanks to Anders again for the english translation! It's not the final one yet and we're both no native speakers, so if you see any mistakes, feel free to tell me. I'm just happy that the english speaking folks on here are getting a chance to understand what's happening :D
Have a great weekend!
Btw: I'll be done with Luna volume 4 around tuesday/wednesday next week which means I'll be "free" very soon! *_*
![[cutE] Storyboard Page 11-20 (GER/ENG)](https://img5.patrefans.com/storage/11/bh/tb/563145-019e8ffb-ddb0-791c-bb6c-1a0dd326afe5.jpg)
Comments
Lisa Brenner
Oh, what you said about Wolf is interesting. Since his role is totally clear for me, your feedback gets me thinking about where to put this information so that the reader doesn't get confused. (it's no secret: he's the boyfriend of Julians sister Lena) Maybe it's sufficient to just show Lena and him doing obvious couple-gestures in one panel in this dinner-scene.
Anders
Julian is shaping up to be quite the multifaceted character. He seems to use Marlon as an outlet for his frustration with his family, and seeks the validation he doesn't get at home from a group of friends with a potentially unhealthy age-gap. I really want to know what happens next now. Though I still can't quite place Wolf in the equation. I originally thought he was part of Phil's clique, but here he is, eating dinner with Julian's family. An uncle? A neighbour? Or just a friend from elsewhere?
