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T.P.H - Chapter 24
🕑 Added 2024-02-02 11:17:24 +0000 UTCToday we get to see a little bit more into Kyla's thoughts.
Important Reminder:
Hey, like I said back in Chapter 20 to manage expectations the TPH story is more of an erotic story than a pornographic one, I've been using these recent chapters to set up events as well as explore more of the characters which I think is important to tell the story.
We will eventually be getting more sexual scenes but I understand there are people who are very interested in the steamy action that's why I'm reminding you all just to make sure everyone understands where I'm coming from and my plans. Of course, for anyone who wants to see more action, I do recommend my side story series, which was pretty much designed for that.
Comments
TranquilSmirks
It's all good. This chapter may be set-up but so long as it pays off down the line then it's all worth it. I realised a while back that the main story is more of a slow burn and the side story was a much faster pace. I'm figuring the new side story will also have more "hard and fast" developments than the more cautious and gradual nature of this one? There are pros and cons to both approaches and I can see the appeal to both of them. But the slow burn in hypno-themed stuff is sadly kind of rare and so when it is done well it scratches an itch the rest just doesn't. It's fun to properly explore each change being made and how it influences characters and the plot.
Christopher Knoll
For sure keep doing what you're doing. Honestly the psychological thriller / manipulation aspect of it and seeing how the girls feelings and the suggestions interplay is at least as hot as anything explicitly... explicit. That's kind of the whole appeal of the hypnosis thing compared to other D/S dynamics. Don't apologize for using the premise to its potential!
