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Side Story 2 - Chapter 01

🕑 Added 2024-03-15 10:53:07 +0000 UTC

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Holion

looking foward to this one. i have hots for susan alreasy.

RollB

Thanks for the commentary! With my side stories I always wanna be more fast-paced than the main one in terms of getting into action.

TranquilSmirks

A good start and an interesting premise. I like that it feels like there's a few different ways this could go (Will Megan be Ryan's ally and snarky commentator on events or quickly/eventually wind up as practice for him trying out hypnosis methods remotely using his IT skills? Will Susan's skill in hypnosis make her more problematic for him or actually make her more susceptible to it herself? How will Ryan handle Ellie after he's done having his fun? Who is Susan meeting and why?) with several things getting set up that might come into play later (Ryan's IT skills and how useful they are when paired with hypnosis, recent tension in his relationship with Susan, Susan being suddenly and suspiciously good at this hypnosis thing, practicing her new hobby on "other friends" aka more characters, etc.). I'm curious to see if this will be fast-paced like the first side story, a slow burn like the main one, or somewhere inbetween. Either way I'm looking forward to it. Keep up the good work!