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Poll on DGA shots
🕑 Added 2023-03-24 03:42:14 +0000 UTC
Hey all!
I recently had someone make a suggestion to add a sequence to DGA. I wanted to do a poll on here to see if you guys would agree with a set of proposed edits or not, as I am going to start looking for consent before messing with scope on DGA.
The proposed edits and shots would be:
156
- (minor edit) move Renee/Andre over so she is hit more by his chest than
shoulder at the end of the shot
157
- Renee falls under his chest rather than into her arm
- Andre takes an extra step ending above Renee before his chest swells above
- The shot cuts short as the growth happens
157.1
- Close up side shot, showing Renee reaction as the chest swells above her snout
- Andre rises again and she starts to pull back and pick herself up
157.2 (cover shot)
- Medium side shot as Renee sits up under him.
- Andre’s torso is in the frame above her, growth ripples down it
- Renees looks up and over, sees his peen in front of her face
- It starts to grow
157.3
- Close up from the side/behind of junk growing in her face
- Reaction, she gets up to leave
158
- Cut in a second or so later after current spurt
- Andre looks over as he does now, except he is looking at her
- Renee gets herself up.
- Cut from this shot before Andre steps backwards
158.1
- a medium shot of them looking at each other, Andre is rather smug
- Andres face grows as they share a moment
- Andres face goes a bit weird
- Andre starts to reposition himself as in the end of current 158.
159
- Edit the start and timing to have Renee return to his front
092
- Remove the last third of the shot as the camera zooms out
- The peen has already grown in the rest of it.
** This is the conceptualized changes, final shots my differ once I get in there and do it.
Why make these edits?
- Its a fun and erotic addition.
- It adds more interaction between Andre and Renee, especially in the peen area
- It shows progression in the size of the peen by using Renee as a reference, especially when contrasted to shot 136
- Knocking Renee over shows an oscillation of Andre’s presence. and foreshadows a bigger invasion of her space in shot 094
- It will allow me to somewhat shift Andre’s attitude towards the sexual tension from Renee from totally oblivious to somewhat in on it, which is what I have wanted to do for a while now (I would be editing his expression in 059 too)
- I have long felt that the camera language in the part of 092 I would need to cut has not fitted in with the rest of the sequence, so it improves flow and consistency in this area.
Why not make these edits?
It is scope creep. Granted, it's in the most fun part of the sequence, but so far as inserts go, 4 new shots and edits to several existing ones is not a minor change to make. I would estimate that this would take an additional two rewards cycles to complete, above just polishing 157 and 158 as they are now. The shot changes may not be needed to significantly improve the overall experience of the animation.
So what do you guys think? I will progress as the majority wills.
Comments
Gigafur
I would definitely like to see more sexual interaction/tension in the future when he is a lot bigger between the two of them! That would be great!
Gusho
I see that people like the changes, but how long will they take?
Daremo
I love that two of the three options are the equivalent of 'Yes!'. ^_^
Gusho
Interesting Shot 157.2
Ando
Well i let it on you! Sounds at least pretty nice! 😉 I'm supporting for a really long time now (sometimes with more money sometimes with less) and i really love what your creating here also that your always honest with your Patreons! 🥰 On the other side I also think you may slowly start to get one of your vids done as well. 😊 i Will always support you nonetheless just wanted to be honest with you as well, that's just fair. 😉
Happy Tiger
I the part where you have Renemon get interested at the end and grab it is by far my most replayed part, I just love that part about Andre!
Happy Tiger
Oh hell yeah!
Aguy769
More pp interaction/growth is always a good thing in my eyes
Tumble
CONTEEEEENT KING
Daremo
Dooooooo eeeeeeeeet
ZabithWolf
Long as we get those wonderfully creaking crackly growths I'm all for more frames.
Dustin Grimsley
I say that while personally I would love to see (and voted for) the new edits, as your argument for them being added is very convincing, I will also say your argument against them is also understandable and I would prefer you not overextend yourself for a little eroticism. Ultimately, you should do what you think is best, as that is the best option for you.
Dnapalmhead
In for a penny, yo
