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Poll. What do you think about stories in Star Warrior and Space Girls?

🕑 Added 2025-08-28 01:06:43 +0000 UTC

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tacotruck59

I know I am late to the party, but I have a few suggestions. 1. This is a tiny one but grammar and sentence structure in the story. I hate to sound like an English teacher, but it distracts you in it. You can use AI to help if you don't want to nitpick it yourself. 2. Draw them out a bit more. I know it's a game and it isn't meant to be that deep but if there is a bit more of a build up it makes the results that much more satisfying. Thanks πŸ‘


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