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Summer School Trip (PROLOGUE)
🕑 Added 2020-07-26 14:00:04 +0000 UTCHinata and Mei were sitting on the stairs that were leading up to the inner shrine. After taking a little bit too long inside, they finally came out. Their classmates were already waiting for them at the entrance. Just as they wanted to put their shoes back on, Mei noticed something.
Mei: Yo Hinata! There's something on your foot!
Hinata: What? Where?
Mei: On your sole! Looks like...I don't know...some dirty stains.
Hinata: Ewwww! I remember I felt something icky inside on the tatami floor. I shouldn't have ditched my socks...but it's soooo warm.
Mai: Ha! Just watch out where you walk with your plump feet the next time! Haha!
Hinata: Heeeey...! They are not plump! I'm sure you also got your feet dirty!
Mai: Me? Nah. I don't think I stepped on anything yucky in there...
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So here's the first part of my new short story "Summer School Trip"! Maybe you have noticed that this is set after all the "action" has happened.
I'll release the "Prologue" (around 3-4 pictures) free for everyone so you can get a feeling for the characters and style.
The main story will start with them entering the shrine and will explain how they got so many red spots onto their soles and other body parts! I'm pretty sure we all know where they come from :D
I'd love to hear some feedback and I hope you are looking forward to it!
Thank you so much <3
Uschi3
PS: Tell me if you'd like a version of this pic that's focused on the feet! ^^
Comments
Nice I need to check it out! I hope you'll like this one as well <3 And Happy to hear that my writing is appreciated ^^
Not at all! I will make it :)
Alright! I'll set it up :)
hiddenwriterrr
MeL did a shrine series and it was incredible, I'm really looking forward to what you can do with it - your stories are always really great!
Fabien Berton
a version of this photo centered on the feet I say yes with pleasure unless it takes you time?
Fabien Berton
the French translations that I send you are you going to publish them on your patreon and put them in original or not?
Absolutely if you want :) Thanks man!
Glad that you like it ^^
Fabien Berton
great another story to translate with pleasure if you wish?
James Roy
Nice concept. Can't wait to see where this goes.
