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Book 1 - Arc 2 Prologue: "First Contact"

🕑 Added 2023-04-10 14:59:26 +0000 UTC

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Osamaru Ta

Good to hear! maybe I'm nitpicking lol

Andrew

Thank you! It was smooth.

Osamaru Ta

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS ONE, GUYS! Grammatically, its about as good as I'm gonna get without a professional editor, but something about it still erks me. How is it to you? does it read smoothly? Well? Is it Exciting? boring? Etc etc

Osamaru Ta

Added a small Bit to Alpha's section that got cut out.


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