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Arc 2 Changes. (First half)
🕑 Added 2024-02-04 04:24:35 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Its that time again! Work has slowed down a bit, but I'm still making good Progress while drawing closer to arc 3.
As I mentioned before, Arc 2 has a lot of issue that need working on, so I'm taking it slow and steady, making sure everything is how I want it, before i post the updates!
With that said here's a list of major changes that have been posted to Royal Road so far!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/66546/alpha-strike-an-interstellar-weapon-platforms
1) - Yutu's introduction in Arc 2 prologue has been replaced with an Alpha Log.
2) - The Yutu section of Chapter 14 as been replaced with an Alpha Log, and been expanded slightly.
3) - The replaced section from the prologue, as well as the following events found in chapter 14 have been combined into "Lesson 15: When Stars Fall."
4) - The previous chapter 15 has be converted into an Interlude, as it fits better.
5) - Grim Adventures -1 as been moved to after Chapter 19 to make the spacing between Grim Adventures a little more consistent.
6) - First part of chapter 17 has been replaced with an Alpha Log.
7) - Ganaa's rehash of events in chapter 19 has been drastically shortened, so now it doesn't feel so much like you're just reading the same thing over again.
Instead, Ganaa reflects more on the present circumstances, and Junior's attack on Yutu is now from Ganaa's perspective instead of Alpha's.
