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(WLTK) B2 - Chapter 1: "The Old And New."

🕑 Added 2025-06-06 22:24:47 +0000 UTC

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Pordgy

Correction suggestion: At the second last paragraph, 'Sarah' should be 'Sam'

Toknightly

Honesty I would skip the prologue. The dude hasn't even opened the shop once yet. It doesn't need to be any slower paced. It feels like book one was all setup with out payoff yet. Seems kinda crazy to even end book one and start book two so soon.


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