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January Prompt: Azula's Greed

🕑 Added 2024-01-13 23:16:54 +0000 UTC

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PrivateXimmy

Side note because I didn’t mention it, Mai’s observation of Azula at the end was adorable. To feel so proud that her efforts have allowed Azula to shed all responsibilities, free to be completely consumed by her most base desires. To feel so wholistic about something so sinful is just such a fun blend of emotions.

James Duke

You make a very good point about character driven vs factual. Haha this is definitely one of those stories where I wish I could have made it 10k rather than just 7. Alas. . .I don't think people would approve of me spending 2 weeks on one prompt lol

PrivateXimmy

The focus on weight switching for various characters (Azula included) as Azula moved from feeder to feedee was a unique twist, it’s not something you see too often in these kinds of stories. Admittedly the shorter runtime kept this mostly matter a fact rather then character driven, but it was a unique concept none the less. I really liked the upgrade to the feeding mechanisms for the various characters as the story progressed: allocating progressively more resources to Azula through improved feeding methods while using her output to aid the original cast. Maybe not as in depth as all the inventive stuff in the Hinata tale, but that’s understandable considering that had a far longer runtime. I outta finish my review of that, I’ve been putting it off for too long!


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