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Naruto's Harem: Hinata's New Lifestyle

🕑 Added 2024-11-18 01:20:22 +0000 UTC

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James Duke

Im glad you enjoyed the story!! I will have to think about your comment about tone. It's an interesting observation and one that I hadn't exactly considered before! And I agree! Dealing with a more shy MC adds a lot of different layers on how to proceed. Getting to use different personalities is always fun!

James Duke

More shall be coming!

PrivateXimmy

Oh I didn’t even think of that, I see it! I’d mentioned an idea for a sequel, but that entry already covers a lot of the bases there! I’d love to see the steps from Naruto’s friends slowly inducting themselves into Hinata’s way of life, to eventually being a harem of blobs.

James Duke

Interesting theory ;)

PrivateXimmy

And heck, that’s not to discredit the early parts of the story either, the whole thing comes together really well! And that dress description at the start, man that shit felt real. Your prose has improved so much over the years! And once again, from top to bottom, the chemistry was top notch. From the playful dialogue, the genuine affection, the incessant adoration of every growing inch of crease, fold, and fat? Peak.

PrivateXimmy

I really love the tone and direction you took for this story. A lot of your stories (and I mean this not as a critique, but rather an observation) really try to hone in on a sort of shameless nature, whether it be a dominance appetite, endless incurable libido, or utter contempt for any decorum beyond complete slobbyness. But this story felt different. Rather, with a more timid and introspective lead, this feels more like a story of self acceptance, as the couples situation evolved with her growing size. From being nervous about her initial growth, to understanding Naruto’s infatuation with it, to eventually embracing it full heartedly. By the end of this story, she’s come to view herself as a beautiful creamy blob, who deserves only an endless breve of delights, the pampering of an entire army of her husband, and to lazily grow unabated, all through no effort of her own (humble goals, right?) And yet even then, she’s still ultimately striving for communication, relishing in the new dynamic contrasts between the two. Equal parts completely helpless yet unequivocally the growing linchpin of their daily lives, its equal parts personally empowering and deeply, sensually vulnerable. Obviously you nailed them getting it on, the way you describe Naruto’s more fit body interacting with her immobile frame of milky fat was sublime, but I think the highlight for me was having an outsider enter their lives, her doing her best to maintain her decency and not spill the beans about how outright *intensely* sensual her own body is to her. And by doing so, she fully embraces that she’s happy like this, to sink into her own self, like an endless warmth. It’s not just a sex thing for her, it’s who and what she is. She’s *fat.* As an adjective, and as a *noun*. So fat that an entire *herd* of pigs equates to reasonable fullness, that it’s perfectly normal for her to feel that the most movement she should have to do in a day is occasionally moving her arms, looking forward to the day she can’t do that she can become ever more pampered. And that any and all interactions should be rewarded with more food to fill her hungry belly. *That* level of fat. Now, if this is a one and done, I think I’d be satisfied, but I do think the wholesome relationship vibes, combined with the promise of a growing gainer community with the warehouse, presents a **lot.** of fun storytelling opportunities. 😏 First off, brilliant idea to have her location essentially become a community center for a gainer community, with her at the center. You could have various couples with all sorts of character and fetish dynamics, as they integrate into the fold under their leadership. And with that warehouse comes the prospect of industrialization, and what comes with it. Their relationship is currently pretty close, but what happens as her needs and appetites continue to skyrocket with her ever growing size. She’d eventually need a feeding tube for most of the day to keep up with that growth, would the two of them be ok with that? It’d be fun to see them reconcile with that sort of element, since you’ve written a more introspective couple here. Communication might become difficult after a certain point, whether it be due to appetite or encroaching fat, and I wonder how they’d navigate that, especially with babies on the way! The ending segment already seems to imply she’s almost more stomach than woman at this point…. so I’m curious at how her character progression will go. Lastly, it also gives a bit of a mentorship element to it! One could imagine, late at night, the smaller fatties still able to waddle their fat guts, marching up her massive frame, the feedees turns doing hits out of her massive feeding tube, not used to that level of intake. Maybe the sleepy titanic Hinata could even teach them, give them some pointers with the unique opportunity. Like young adults trying liquor or something else for the first time with a pro, showing them the ropes. 😉 Great story, would love a part 2, story if I got ahead of myself but it just sorta popped into my mind.

BlastOff

Lovely story. Always happy to see more Hinata Naruto cuteness

Thiscantbereal

Nice! Honestly this kind of feels like it could be the prequel to "Tenten's Heavy Date". Definitely fits considering the ending.


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