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Zelda's Despondent Champion

🕑 Added 2023-10-09 23:19:59 +0000 UTC

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James Duke

Thank you for the detailed examination and critique! Your extended thoughts are always very appreciated! There is almost certainly going to be a follow up!! Basic plot is percolating in my head. I will maybe give things just a little break, just because I don't want to hit the Zelda stuff too hard and burn people out. Haha its a favorite setting of mine, but I don't want to turn it into a crutch

PrivateXimmy

I adore the contrast you present between Zelda’s pristine, slender form and Urbosa’s heaving, sweaty mass. Zelda, well spoken and articulate, having gained newfound confidence, while her champion has given up on almost all bodily, almost having fallen into herself in a way. Even making contact with Urbosa’s drenched folds causes Zelda’s perfect dress and delicate gloves to be stained: but that’s what makes Zelda’s perverse adoration so fascinating. That’s what Zelda “wants”. To be completely enveloped by Urbosa, her sweat to coat her in grime, her scent and stench to fill her lungs, and her tons of flab to physically envelop her. As she straddles her partners mounds of soft flesh, the way she comforts her of this newfound normally is just super intoxicating to witness: lapping between her folds as if it were nectar, doting referring to her expulsions as “blessed divine winds”. It makes it come off as cute, in a way. If you ever choose to follow this up, I’m really excited to see how that comes up, as Urbosa seeks to please Zelda in the only influence she can expand: her presence. Size, scent, preparation. It’s gross, but the way Zelda reacts to it all makes it seem so beautiful and pure. Both working in tandem to keep Urbosa’s stomach of incredible appetite satisfied, and all the comeuppance that comes with doing so. Bravo!

James Duke

Haha I definitely plan on there being another! But I like to let the series percolate. It's sort of my go to when I feel really inspired.

Thiscantbereal

Loved this story! Zelda's love and support "unlocking" Urbosa's gas was really great. That ending makes it sound like there's another chapter in this story coming down the line. If so, I'm looking forward to it!


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