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Chapter 266 - Dreamscape

🕑 Added 2025-11-19 20:10:19 +0000 UTC

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Samuel Sever

tftc

UraniumPhoenix

Fixed, thanks.

AlecL

Great observations. Makes me think this cycle is really reinforcing who the prophets are (on a deep level) when they’re alone. Many of the characteristics you’re describing were present in Miriam from the very first chapter and the cycle has only entrenched them.

Rico Anthony

“Time in linear in the Mausoleum, now,” is linear in?

A.Irsigler

Mirian from an outside perspective is terrifying, and not in a "badass" way - but as someone who grows more deranged, less human and more powerful each cycle. Someone who is hording knowledge and lording power over the other prophets. Till Zhuan made the effort it was just really heartbreaking how Miriam slowly fell apart - Gabriel clearly has the emotional intelligence to see whats happening with Miriam, but he is scared of her and Miriam doesnt respect him enough to value his insights. She does with Zhuan. Zhuan is an archmage of her own, clearly intelligent and very cerebral in her own way. Also strong minded with strong opinions (go read my goshdarn books already!) - and makes an effort to reach out to mirian. No wonder readers become attached to her. Miriam is at some level aware that the other prophets feel alienated by her - but she is so goshdarn lonely and burnt out from the burden of the task, she (along with her general disposition) doubles down on what is in her own comfort zone. Esoteric magics, mathematical problems and a love for Enteria. And yeah - her being a prophet and being as lonely as she is, is clearly taking its toll on her. She is suffering herself to the point she has a hard time mustering the empathy for someone being a victim of a psychopath and driven to suicide. All she can see is someone not suffering as much for Enteria/the task at hand as she is (presumably) - and it makes her lash out. Clear signs that she is hurting, and hurting bad. Zhuan to the rescue, really. I hope Zhuan can move Ibrahim (who is... particular, but has great insight when he puts his mind to it) and Gabriel (who... has the right idea about enjoying the time given to them, to some degree) to shove Miriam onto a better, more self-caring path.

Mr NerfGun

If mind control on that level is even possible, I doubt; first that it isn't visible to Mirian, and second that it could be done so fast.

BlastYoBoots

“Okay, here are the most delicious varieties of wine I’ve found through the loops—“ (I’m kidding of course.)

BlastYoBoots

Hm? But they already have/are/will wandered/wandering/wander those natural place-times. Humans and their silly commitment to thinking in linear time… (cue laugh from Eyeball now/then/eventually).

Gopard

I think we also really REALLY get another point on the whole "Miriam Mental state situation" here... Her Reaction to Celen? "He went into forever Suicide such a coward fuck I DESPISE him, now how to you best go about using someone you despise hmm...?" This was such a tell... like fuck man, I think Liuan was well justified in all her suspicions and shit lol Miriam might detach from "mortal life" enough to now eventually after seeing the "Normies" as "almost lesser beings who she can't be bothered to care about" to then feeling this way about Celen... Then whatever Prophet isn't "helping actively enough with the CORRECT (Miriams) plan to save Enteria and then all the other prophets potentially? Unless Zhuan pulls her back somehow who I think has easily become my favourite character. But I definitely agree about the Liuan situation I mean Akana Praedir was SO PERFECT for so many different ways to "reform it" you could go the hardcore intelligence/Church combination route even taking over/controlling the Industry titans and other rich people by controlling all information and the RID and Church... You can go the hardcore Oligarch way cooperate with mostly the rich bastard industrialists and get them to dance to your tune making them think "helping the time traveler is surely profitable she knows everything after all" or something like that... Or a mix of those an "control of the general elite get them onboard and control the country like that" or there is the hardcore Populist route... Go to the president tell him "I'm a Prophet These big groups in RID, Senate and the Elite Oligarchs want you dead let me help you against them and in return believe me on this we need A, B and C to save the planet" and then with the president (thus control of the masses and legitimacy) and control over the remains of the gutted RID (after you use the assassination attempt to purge RID and Army of the conspirators) and control over the chruch do a de facto socialist revolution deseat the Elites and focus all in on leading Akana Praedir to building the (Whatever Miriam comes up with wether its first a Massive Regulator or a space craft/Air ship for Luamin/Divir Moons) But now I worry we will soon see Liuan more like killed/or branded as the enemy before any of that plot potential can happen. I think the main reason why Liuan wasn't at all further developed is because the Scebur situation either She or Scebur is simply "set up as the antagonist" by the author and they didn't want to reveal to much too us readers for this final showdown I would guess. Still I think earlier POVs maybe just her wrangling the Church in Akana Praedir, or searching for the Relics, or reacting to Miriam doing insane Miriam stuff or her reaction to the gates or her attempts to try to get the Industrialists to work for the Saving of the world or so on...

Parker Groseclose

A lot of comment about Liuan being Scebur, I personally think she got beaten by Scebur and is currently being mind controlled.

Keifru

Yanno, if not Liuan quickly finding a scapegoat- it could also simply be Liuan has been a mastermind who another person (Scebur) and Troyten reported to. She could be the lynchpin that put the other guy in the forever curse, and one of the reasons she's been biding time is that guy *wasnt supposed to be cured*. So she's been making new plans/reassessing the threat of Mirian and figuring out a way to take her out of the picture. It could be there was another unknown prophet which Liuan sacrificed figuring out how to remove the device and explaining where the 2nd prong came from. Which is still up in the air- unless it comes into play "other side of the planet" nations as a curveball on the whole situation.

A.Irsigler

Agree with the rest of the readers here - Scebur feels like a Liuan play for Liuan to explore radically different approaches towards the other Prophets. If she needs to test the might of the other prophets/Mirian she just "dies" for Scebur to "take the rains". On the other hand for any of that to really matter Liuan needs a way to permanently deal with Mirian/a Prophet. Maybe she found an Artifact or thinks Artifacts can remove Prophets from the loops. She saw it happen to Troitin - and that has to keep someone like Liuan up at night. On that note - I wish the other prophets, especially Liuan would be a bit more distinctive as characters? Zhuan has gotten a lot more screentime with Mirian and it has been fantastic, Gabriel did beforehand as did Ibrahim. But Mirian seems to be strangly apprehensive about digging a bit more into Liuan... which, admittedly is on brand for Mirian. Shes does not engage problems on the people level, at all. Divitrius on the other hand? The name seems to break towards Divine/Divinity, Detriment and/or detritus which is a shattered off part of something, a fragment. So maybe something along the lines of "a fragment of divinty"? The silver machinery he is hooked up with seems to indicate old "human" tech from the spacefaring age. Maybe a surviving human from way back when? Or a part of the ruling class that floated the moon upwards striving for divinity, and now cought in a sort of half-dead/half divine state? Who knows! the author, probably. x)

FuriousDee

It wasn't exactly casual but it was impressive.

chumponimys

Making the dream linear is such a cool plot progression!! Both a demonstration of what a monster Mirian is now (just casually sharing thought streams with and being understood/acknowledged by The Ominian) but also having so many cool repercussions! Zephyr falcons at the start of the loops are no longer needed. Collaboration between loopers will be way easier. It'll probably be a lot harder to hide things when ppl are asking for and giving more frequent updates. And our poor little lost looper finally gets returned to the fold!! Jherica isn't the most junior of them all anymore (in terms of ability + loop experience). I bet that'll feel good for them--to help another go through what they just went through in trying to get caught up.

Gopard

Fully agree something IS off... and then why isn't Gabriel revealing what ever his investigation brought up in the "Scebur loop"? I could also see a completely different outcome: Gabriel as we know beliefs still in the 'balance of power' so what if he actually clocked scebur in that last loop then investigated his normal actions in the loops till now to help Liuan catch him in the grand reveal proving both of their usefulness and gaining at least some leverage against "Fuck Miriam is just solving every problem by herself" and then when Miriam promptly pulled the "talking to infitely powerful Divine Daddy" card to deal with Scebur he quickly gave Liuan the Infos to get rid of Scebur.

Mr NerfGun

I feel bad for the Ominian, They now have to wander the dessecrated Entaria instead of their beloved nature.

Charles Simon

I agree Scebur is definitely Liuan but I don’t think Gabriel blabbed. She just needs to find an excuse for why they can’t find Scebur in the dream. At some point Liuan is going to backstab Miriam and Gabriel will step into to save her as he will have been tracking Liuan’s moves

Josiah

Yeah I called that. Liuan was using the whole "Scebur" thing to make herself seem more important to the prophets right after being dismissed and disrespected in the last meeting. Real convenient that immediately after the meeting, Scebur becomes a real problem and can magically take over all of Akana right under Liuan's nose, making Liuan very important to stopping the invasion and gaining leverage over the other prophets to achieve her political aims. Gabriel found her out and told her he knew. Considering how much she hates Tlaxhuaco, she's definitely behind those Scebur attacks too. Only thing I'm disappointed about is there doesn't seem to be any prophets on the other side of the world. Although they never went past the storm wall in the dream so maybe there's still a chance. Bit weird they're not curious about what's over there and can get there so easily in the dream.

Enthernal

Or so they can help in the next cycles to track them down. Depending on the starting conditions and who he is, he might receive aid if someone else finds him.

Enthernal

Good point. For what it's worth, in one of the late 190's chapters, Mirian had tought she should see if there was a way to prevent the hole from being visible to soul sight. It was never mentioned after, but it's assumable it would be a high priority for a prophet trying to lay low.

Enthernal

An easier sense-check, Sceburs soul should still be in the dream if even Celens is after he's dead.

That_guy

Sus

Enthernal

Finally some development! Not what we expected, which is why I love this story so. I'm also pleased to see Mirian finally take scebur serious now that there's a reliable way to track him/her down. As for the end, very suspicious. I hope we'll see some rapid development in the following chapters. For one Liuan, if she's speaking the truth, should (be made to) reveal who scebur was, and even better, show them where he is in the dream. That way they can confirm it's actually a 9th prophet (still) in the loop. If she doesn't it would be very suspicious if she doesn't. An other possibility, what if Liuan sees Celen and goes "what is Scebur doing here?". That'd be some first rate drama. If Liuan is right, then was Celen acting alone and Jherico just happened to find him after being cursed and drew the wrong conclusions? Or is he actively corroborating with Scebur? It's one of the options I've been thinking that is likely and would make sense why they're opposing Liuan and probing Mirian. They were both "cursed" (in a way, if you have to resort to commit suicide repeatedly, that'd count) and might assume/know Liuan was aiding Troytin. It would explain why Scebur focused on Liuan and ignored the weaker Jherico. It would also explain why they want to just probe Mirian if they've come suspect she's the one that took Troytin out of the loop. They have no reason to go after her, she helped Jherico after all, but would be very wary of her. If Liuan is lying, it'd be a genius play to cover up not having a name/soul to show. It'd cause distrust among the prophets at the least. It'd also be very suspicious Gabriel is the messenger then, as well as him being absent now...

Armo

I have to agree, Liuan is way too sus. This reeks of an emergency manoeuvre to cover her tracks after Mirian pulls the ‘I can and will actually talk to the Ominian to solve this problem’ card. One way to sense-check this is: has Liuan actually called out the Sorcerer Elite and Archmages, or not? If she hasn’t and just said she had, that’s a serious point in the shenanigans column. I wonder what Celen’s deal is. Hope he helps Mirian uncover what’s going on. I’m slowly coming to the idea that Gabriel’s agenda is to neutralise the prophets. We’ve heard many times now how his ideology leans towards practical prevention of suffering and recognition of the value of the status quo. Ultimately, he might want to eliminate the most disruptive or dangerous prophets after the cycles are over with the fewest casualties. Whatever is going on with Scebur, eliminating Mirian seems to require Liuan and the armies of Akana Praedar, so he’s covering for them to prevent a collision that would remove one of his pieces prematurely. The issue with that plan is that Mirian can just become powerful enough to singlehandedly defeat Akana Praedar’s armies, even if the opposition remains fragmented. I wonder, also, what the Ominian is thinking. One of the little ants he’s been looking at successfully spelled out a full sentence. That’s gotta be notable.

Mr NerfGun

Since she is taken back in time, in a way, by being a tag along to the tree, the same might happen for the dreams.

Matthew

How did Liuan recognize a "soul pattern"? If she ever saw them with life sense then she would have seen the hole in their soul and known they were a Prophet.

Myr S.

how is Xecatl in the dreams? i thought there'd be a giant tree in a cloak or something, since doesnt she technically lack a prophet needle?

Zurko

Gabriel please share your wisdom!

Tanna

Also that test doesn't tell her all that much. It's only for maximum capacity under ideal conditions with a single spell. An assault shows how well Mirian can perform under pressure and over extended periods of time, what spells she uses and the capacity she casts each one at, her strategies in combat and as a military commander, etc.

Rodmin

That would actually be the biggest plot twist.

Gustav

DOUBT! Definitely reinforced my belief that Liun is Scebur. People were arguing that it wouldn't be her because she wouldn't have needed to measure Mirian's strength, but I think she does. She wouldn't believe Mirian to not be holding back in front of the other prophets.

zoarian

Being able to communicate with Ominian means Mirian grasps some ideas with a similar context to Elder Gods. It's so cool!

Cutbastra

MAN it just feels like Liuan is Scebur but at the same time its so obvious like surely not right? Or is it actually Celen? He all of a sudden decided to show up out of nowhere. But its reasonable, What is not however is Liuan suddenly finding scebur as soon as Mirian starts seriously investigating and rewrites the dreamscape so they can find him here too. And the way Gabriel seems to almost be hiding something until the right moment, or was cursed/mind altered to think something else. I FEEL SOMETHING IS OFF BUT I CANT PROVE IT. [Insert dexter meme]

Neptune

If Luian immediately knew who to head for, they should be able to share more information on who they are so another prophet can double check for a mark.

lenkite

Wonder whether Liuan was even "killed" in the last loop.

Tanna

Nothing suspicious about Liuan at all here. Totally.

Ace

yep

Faultedbeing

Celen was the one that commits suicide at the beginning of every loop right?

Ryan Hall

Yeah she's super sus. Like this happens almost immediately as they devise a way that they might find Scebur in the dreamscape. That's way too much of a coincidence for me

Clara

Would be pretty funny if everything is actually just exactly as it seems. Scebur was a bitch and got cursed, Celen is back, Liuan is being honest

Ethereal Sky Daddy

I am more convinced than ever that Liuan is Scebur.

Lamaschokolade

I don't know, I still think Liuan is suspicious. Like immediately "running of" to eliminate Scebur so she is the one doing it an nobody's is there to witness.


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