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Chapter 271 - Excursion

🕑 Added 2025-12-10 20:44:30 +0000 UTC

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Rico Anthony

"Liuan looked out and Enteria, gaze inscrutable," Looked out *at?

Atlas Dwarf

Considering Ibrahim sees the Ominian as the only True Prophet, he might go full return the temporal anchors by any means necessary.

Mai0e

We will see those at the story progresses Iam sure of it.

Azereth

I do personally think she is suffering some serious megalomania, and craziness. But ultimately it comes down to is it crazy if your right. Best comparison would be to someone outside the loop whom she can't objectively prove the world is ending. Her attitude and stance on gathering power is extreme, and she is clealry a megalomaniac. Accounting for the loop their is objective evidence that if she doesnt take control the world litteraly ends, so does it still count?... Psychology doesn't really have a section on magical exceptions 😂

Emma Mass

I've seen a lot of comments saying that Miriam is, to put it simply, going crazy and is excessively paranoid and narcissistic. I wouldn't entirely disagree on than but I would despute some of it just the same. Mirians been stuck living the same less than 6 months for more 25 years. The degradation of her empathy is entirely expected. Honestly I'm surprised it held on this long. I actually don't think she's any worse than Ibrahim, Gabriel or liuan. People in real life are already experiencing empathy fatigue from the constant negative news, systemic corruption, constant wars etc. And we have a linear, non repeating timeline. Further, the consequences for our actions are permanent and can't just be undone and tweaked. People already show disregard for the genocide in Palestine, and barely care about the one in Sudan, but somehow Miriam is supposed to, despite having seen it play out more than 200 times. She's annured to death, and suffering. She's experienced death and suffering so great and eclipsing than any person would have given up by now. I wonder if people are forgetting the last like 250 chapters of this book, where everything happened to wear away at here humanity. I'm not saying this in defense of her actions, just that everyone seems to think she's turning into Mussolini, and that's they feel she's being unreasonable. She's not, she's not anymore obtuse than the other prophets, at least except for Jherica, xecatl and zhuan. The council of prophet's was her idea, she taught everyone in it some arcane magic as well as soul magic, she shared information about the gates, labyrinth, leyline and her research. As much information as she is currently witholding and power she's secretly accumulating, Mirian has been the single most effective prophet out of everyone. And no one here, besides xecatl and zhuan have given her any reason to trust them. Not Ibrahim with his wars, Gabriel with his secrecy, and liuan with her own plan or designs. Not celen either. Nevermind troitin and scebur. Mirians character progression, in my opinion, is Inspite of everything. I think she can be much worse. We may get to see that. But I don't think her actions, taking everything into consideration are outlandish or crazy. I think it's normal for her to be so single minded considering the state of her psyche, relationships with people, or inability to really form relationships with prophets who's motivations don't match her own or are hostile. Especially since it's been her plans that have made the only permanent, tangible progress. When the cycle ended early when she went to divir, everyone new it was Miriam. Because Mirian really is the only one who's had made any effective change and can make effective change to the cycle that doesn't include blowing up a gate. Nevermind that she is already so much stronger than the others to the point where she can't actually enlist their help with many things. They either don't have the depth of knowledge, skilss and training, or capacity and finesse. Others prophets can't body the labyrinth like she can, survive on divir, make tri bonded glyphs, perform complex soul magic, etc. Honestly if Mirian where to disappear right now. I see very little hope of success. Perhaps progress from zhuan and xecatl, but not success. Before the sort out the messy human politics, they need to stop the moon from falling. Mirians really the only one who seems to have the ability to do that at this moment in time. Also, even if her hate for celen is not really justified, it's not misplaced. In mirians eyes, the prophets are supposed to work together to solve the problem, but for her, what celen is doing is like intentionally cutting off an arm because it doesn't want to work. She finds him a waste of very limited resources that the ominian used risking his life, to save the world. So yes Mirian is kinda slipping, but she kinda has every right to be.

Thaabit Rivertree

I'm honesty kind of disappointed we didn't get to see any thorough testing, battle testing, or reactions from other people seeing the armor. I was hoping we'd get a POV of someone else describing it upon seeing it the first time. It feels like she just went straight into using it to convert energy and that's that.

Gopard

nah... man why would Mirian of all people share information? monopolizing it is the very best way for her mind to remain totally we'll adjusted nothing hyper paranoiad and narcissistic about this at all no sirs (ah i mean you stupid ants how dare you not follow MY plan go fuck yourself I despise you soo much!) Yeah I totally agree she should share information but she won't Mirian needs an intervention and Zhuan is going to have to be much more direct ro slap sense into her than cryptic hints... ofc the risk is if you tell Mirian how she is currently going insane her paranoiad ass is likely to just remove your soul anchor immediately or something...

Dalayo Adeeko

I hope Ibrahim gets a Soul Ascension when he sees the Ominian. Since the gap between Miriam and the others has widened so much, it would be nice to see the others have some growth as well

Matt H

Yeah, between that, Mirian's disregard for "mundane inventions", and then Zhuan's comment at the end I think Mirian is well on track to be a dictator. Sure, she'll see herself as a "good one", but her path seems to be one of doing anything (so long as it's something she thinks is right) as long as it'll allow them to survive the calamity. She doesn't seem to care what she needs to break to get there or how the pieces will fall at the end which is... certainly a choice.

Clara

Mirian hating on Celen is interesting character progression. Back when she was first meeting all the others, she saved her judgement calls for like. Behaviours they actively exhibited. Here it seems she's judging him more for lacking certain behavior, and not being "part of the solution" enough

Mr NerfGun

Mirian is more mad about Celen 'running away from his duty as a Prophet' and killing himself than his current usefulness.

Robert Mullins

To be fair, Celen 's only been awake a year. Mirian with a year of experience was probably about as helpful.

Touch

Others fly to a destination and he just ran, others uses a lift and he literally JUMP DOWN THE SHAFT One day he gonna stop the moon/airship/spells with one hand or smth

Mai0e

She just throws shade at Akana, but her saying also fits for the prophet situation as a whole

Mai0e

I think it’s more a barb against Akana Praediar. Liuan and Zhuan are always in fight when thy meet each other because Zhuan despises Akana and sees it as a failing Organisation

Enthernal

yeah, I feel there's a wider meaning to it then just a barb at Mirian. It always comes down to the same; we know too little about the whole situation. I can't wait for there to be some major revelations.

Enthernal

I feel like there's definitely something there, but there's too little clues to what form it would take. But the way leylines gather excess/bad mana seems to imply there is a second part to the cycle. Whether that's a single individual or a massive spirit construct everyone is part of without knowing it, or something else entirely, that's a different question.

V0lcano

"...The more power that accumulates at the top of a pyramid, the more likely the whole edifice collapses catastrophically. Hmm… perhaps such a catastrophe is already developing?" This can apply to so much in humanity's situation. First, there are the handful of incredibly powerful Elder Gods, the Ascended Gods, Mirian herself, and the Prophets as a group. With the timeloop, it's a far greater problem than normal. Ik it's probably a barb intended for Mirian but I wonder just how true it'll be for the situation as a whole with the Gods, once we understand what's happened, and what's setting the fields of time on fire.

Tim

"The more power that accumulates at the top of a pyramid, the more likely the whole edifice collapses catastrophically. Hmm… perhaps such a catastrophe is already developing?” Is that a little bit of a wedge showing between Zhuan and Mirian? She'll certainly be excited to hear about Eclipse. I wonder when the "betrayal" will happen.

Enthernal

interesting train of thought from Zhuan at the end. It can be taken multiple ways, I just hope it doesn't foreshadows betrayel.

Cutbastra

Wait, but his writings! I have a wild theory, so we know he is good with a pen and propoganda, right? And at the beginning of the loops he always died un his desk with papers and ink scattered around. I think he may have been writing and spreading around papers full of propoganda to fight against Troytin, then promptly offed himself. But he couldn't have known the exact details of who Troytin is and what he is doing, so he just indiscriminantly targets everyone in hopes of disrupting him. This would also explain the randomness of the people that get caught up in his scheme, as he would just send his propoganda to different places. After all this could just not be an act, and hes just that bad at verbal communication. Its possible he somehow managed a way to communicate after death but while the loops are still going on (dreams?)

Mr NerfGun

Ibrahim is getting really badass with his Dervish powers.

Tanna

I don't think so "Even without Equinox on, the fact that she’d taken to casually levitating around unnerved most people" I guess that could just be a hypothetical, but I think someone would have mentioned it if she had it summoned

Keifru

Oh boy, is everything going to go to shit after viewing the Ominian, or when they return from perceiving Them... Also, i wonder if they could use Divir has a launch point to get to the other moon. Then again, the anti-magic field poses problems flying, for all the advantage of starting from a place of little gravity compared to escaping the gravity of the planet and making the trip.

gotag

My first thoughts are man Celen certainly doesn't seem like a shadowy mastermind whose alterego goes by "Scebur"... but that's just what he wants us to think

FuriousDee

She should mention that the catalysts best for necromancy are made out of bits of the Omnian

Myr S.

everything feels too peaceful!! its ominous, like the calm before the storm

YarrowFlowers

Celen appears! am I reading it right that she has Equinox summoned while she’s doing this? Because that would mean anyone who saw what she was doing last loop would have confirmation that she can take things through the loops.

Cutbastra

I just realized, Is the Labyrinth a living thing? Is it the actual body of a god/a godly avatar/a mixture of the "gods?" The ancient humans could have flown here and stumbled upon a planet sized eldritch being that bends reality to its whims, or at least they didnt realize what it was at first. It could be a cosmic dragon egg situation, where the entire planet is an "egg" or a sleeping place for a Great Old One the size of planets, with leylines as its mana channels and blood vessels and the labyrinth as its skin and body. Anyways this is just unlikely speculative ramblings, and the gods dont quite fit into this


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