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Made in Taiwan 29

🕑 Added 2021-10-26 07:16:00 +0000 UTC
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ds1000

Thank you for your feedback and sorry for the late reply. I appreciate the honesty as it will help me in my future stories.

mrs02

Hi, i agree with you, probably is your best and it was really fun, your stories are a lot o fun. The only point i would change would be the end, i think this last chapter could be split into two more at least, it would be a lot of fun to reed when he realized he was stuck as Simona for good in more detail like you did in the previous chapters. These last chapters could show us also, after his desperation fase his adjustment to his new life, the details of the mental state of your victims are good part of your stories and i know you can do this really well. Also Mei could be single and bisexual, but with these comments don't think I didn't like it, I liked it a lot.


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