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Outclassed - page 24 - WIP & PSD
🕑 Added 2022-04-16 14:37:35 +0000 UTCI'm not 100% satisfied with the way Suarez licking his lips looks like on panel 2 but I tried my best.
Also people were speculating about whether I was hiding Suarez's dick on purpose because people were pointing out that the previous pages seemed to go out of their way to hide it. I really wasn't. First of all, I posted concept art that showed his dick back in September, so I wasn't intending to keep that as a mystery or anything.
And second, which I think some people might find interesting, I did all the rough MSPaint sketches with the page layout and dialogues back in April 2021 (which I strongly recommend for everyone trying to get into making comics- have the entire story and page layouts done before you do anything else). So, for the most part, I'm not really writing around the audience's reaction and expectations.
I did make some changes along the way (pages 30-33 IIRC are the ones that changed the most from rough sketch to WIP/finished page) but the majority of changes were tweaking the dialogue to add set-ups or payoffs here and there and make the plot/character beats more thematically consistent. Which, yes, is a weird thing to say about a p0rn comic.
