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Outclassed 2 - Page 27 (WIP & PSD)
🕑 Added 2025-07-05 15:16:19 +0000 UTCRan into a bit of an issue this page trying to make Alfonso stand out in the second panel, you can tell the outlines are extra thick in the finished drawing to compensate and try to sell the depth but unfortunately Alfonso's brown fur blends a little with Suarez's. I gave him a small highlight there to distinguis shte two but i could have pushed it a little more.
Also not sure if the motion on Alfonso's chair sliding backwards as he stands up in the first panel reads well...
Comments
Cody Fox
The chair reads, but it's a bit odd. I don't think you needed the motion lines. By standing it's pretty implied the chair was moved. Also the layout on this page is fantastic! Love that third panel in both this WIP and the final. It has a lot of energy without being cheesy. Aces work as usual!
