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🕑 Added 2018-04-20 20:39:19 +0000 UTC

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Jackrabbit

well, OOC issue for Kat...

Randall Hendren

Ah Raine, how cute and innocent you are.

Joshua

I think we know~ *Winky face*

Mr Fuzz

i wounder if there will be a comic strip about what kats fanfic is

Onefoursix Tym

The game "Risk of Rain" has forever ruined my context for that phrase.

DarthKeidran

I don’t know how I missed this. It’s hilarious because it’s true.

Panther

Jermaine Jackson and Pia Zadora : "- And when the Raine begins to fail" XD

Kuroko

Risk of Raine. Okay, who's gonna write it?

tamtheotter

I think its because she still hasnt replaced her torn up shirt

RandomTonio

I thought Raine was always shy and socially awkward

Panther

Why Raine is covering her breasts as Natani ? She's not trying to hide about her be a girl , meanwhile .......

Lexio

Omg this is so cute XD and Kats reaction is priceless XD

James Scott

"A Risk of Raine." Nice reference.

A original name

She probably just added Some “Art”

SCD

Kathrin: Uh Raine, that’s how you really are. Raine: Oh my god, you’re right! I’m a living fan fiction character, NOOOOO!!!! Kathrin facepalms as hard as she can.

Code Mystic Artist

Ranine is so cute. Like i just can't! Her character is so crazy and claw-some(She is so Red's wife later..)

Rhawkas

"Vol. 1" makes me wonder how many volumes there are (or at least planned). XD

So much denial from Raine, how fucking cute!

Lauren Appelquist

I think by that she meant that Kat nailed their personalities in her fanfic

Takumi Fujiwara

Raine i just have one thing to say <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHC1230OpOg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHC1230OpOg</a>

Carlysle Brown

5 stars by Eric? I wonder what Kat had to do to get that...

Carlysle Brown

Kat's face says it all...

MoppyPuppy

Geez Raine really let herself go.

Sylvrwolflol

Raine got him arrested for stalking and attempted sexual assault. Last I heard, he was a slave somewhere down in Wolf territory. I'm sure it's way below your pay grade, Mr. Sirus.

Jordan Dean Ezekude

"Everyone else is perfect?" Like hell. They make Raine look like the diamond in their sordid rough.

csstats

Haha, Kat's face makes this one for me. Silly Raine is so oblivious to how others see her. :D

Matthew Morgan

We love you Raine because you are kind, sweet and gentle and no one can change that Raine. you may be shy but you will always be in are haerts.

Edmund Sirus

What happend to "raine is my girlfriend"?

DarthLeonite

C’mon Raine! That personality is why we love you! Heje

KattTastic161

*coughs* Yes you are Raine, but we still love you :)

DanthePaniniMan

Everyone's a critic

dylan hogan

I love the "⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ -Eric" on the back.

Steve Gloria

Raine...not awkward....what? Are we talking about the same Raine?

Finn Brenner

*cries*

Finn Brenner

ok, maybe a little

Finn Brenner

...

Finn Brenner

Yeah Raine, I’m not shy or socially awkward either,

Cloud_Basterran

You sure about that Raine?

Kaija

Kat is full of Judgement XD!

Her reaction is me in a nutshell if people say anything about my social skills XD

Kaija

"Knot intrested"? 8D

noxamillion

I'm guessing Raine has not looked herself in a mirror in forever now. Also, Kat's expression is gold!

The five stars from eric is so perfect 👌

InTheLionsDen

After her "I'm not like that at all!" line we just need Zen to put his arm around her and whisper in her ear "I knew it was just an act. Good to know."

Backonninja

In a good way, or a bad way?

coredumperror

Hahaha! I love the ongoing saga of Raine and Kat's Fanfic. Wait a sec... now that I think about it, isn't this like, super creepy? Writing erotica about characters you like in fiction is one thing. But Kat's writing erotica about *her friends*. That's weeeeeird.