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Freefall Swap

🕑 Added 2018-05-08 20:00:47 +0000 UTC

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fancymars

i think its a k to 1 grade education game for kids

Connor Parsons

...WTF is freefall?

Meowium99

o boi SIN NIPS ARE SIN

Rj

I see you changed your avatar a while ago

Sartharina/Scow2

I like FreeFall. The art style is more Newspaper Comic, though, instead of Tom's animesque illustrations. And it works, when you see it in that light (And update frequency). The cast is pretty great, IMO. At least Florence, Winston, the more regular robots (Sawtooth Rivergrinder, Querty, Dvorak, Edge, and Blunt), and even the mayor has great stuff going on. Sam Starfall is... weird. But also pretty great for the gags. I love how Ishiguro is a geek who really seems to dig the "Corrupt Corporate Executive"/Villainous posturing he gets to do, without actually being a bad guy. In fact, all the antagonists are pretty great. Only the dude named after a mite and Mr. Kornada are 'flat' characters. But what I really love about Freefall is how it handles the inhumanity of the non-human characters (Though some of it gets cringey, due to one of the comic's Big Problems), and tries to explore what it means to be a non-human sapience - Especially in the case of the robots, where they are both person and programmable machine. All the gushing about Freefall aside - I think it has a few big problems: 1. Contemporary culture references. These really date the comic, and take away from the sense of it being hundreds of years in the future. But, some jokes age better than others (Though I really cringed at the 15-years-too-late Leeroy Jenkins joke.) 2. Contemporary technology. Especially given how much modern tech has advanced since the comic started. This often ties into issue 1 as well. 3. 3rd Panel Gag. Every strip tries to end on a funny note - but in situations where humor isn't really warranted, it comes in the form of forced snark (Either thought, or in awkward dialogue), which really isn't all that funny, detracts from the mood of the comic, and wrecks the pacing by generally rendering 33% of the comic's space useless in an extended arc. 4. Really Awkward Author On Board segments. Mark Stanley's gotten much better about not delving into these, where situations are created that only work because they have to work because that's how the Author thinks the world works/should work.

Kirien Fost

She's female, but instead of big bewbs, she has 4 rows of canine nips.

DarthLeonite

Female. She’s just skinny

SCD

She used the IDFA cheat code from Doom to get the Rocket Launcher.

Finn Brenner

I’m crying with joy! The day has come again when intelligent conversation can be conducted on the internet!

Thisguy

And once she does, she’ll realise her wallet is missing.

Kai Lemoran Wellington

Well, what I wanted to say was, is Florence a female or male? I haven't read that comic... Yet, and I'm just wondering because he/she looks feminine, but doesn't have the *ahem* cups to back it up.

Kai Lemoran Wellington

Oh now it wants to work!

Kai Lemoran Wellington

Hoi

wallefan

Art quality? Tom wins, hands down. But story wise... I mean, don't get me wrong, the Twokinds story line is pretty cool, but...daaaaaaaaang. Maybe I'm just a geek, but I found this one impossible to put down. Once you get past the sam-is-doing-dumb-stuff-again-ha-ha and the thinly-veiled political commentary and cynicism, it actually gets pretty darn good. Try starting <a href="http://freefall.purrsia.com/ff1600/fc01551.htm" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">here</a>, this is where the major story arc starts, so it gets WAY more interesting almost immediately. Also it looks way better in color. (Oh, sorry, forgot to mention that technically speaking Florence is an AI. And I swear it's not yet another technically incorrect science fiction comic. It's perfectly technically correct, and I should know, I'm a computer scientist - but at times it does get a bit weird. And geeky. Which is probably why I'm so obsessed with it. :P )

DarthLeonite

Yep

wallefan

2kinds needs more robots no it doesn't

DarthLeonite

Thank you, Mcclaw. I’ve been feeling terrible all day for making people angry about my comment. So thank you.

Rj

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InTheLionsDen

DOGGIES!

InTheLionsDen

Florence Ambrose is a female. Her body design was based on an actual female Earth wolf so no, she does not have large human styled breasts. If she were to get pregnant with a litter of pups her eight nipples (never shown but implied by censor bars) would probably get a little larger while lactating but nothing even close to the size of Natani's breasts.

A original name

This comment section is waaaaay too long

Kai Lemoran Wellington

I'm slow, so don't rub it in, is Florence a female or male? He/she looks feminine, but doesn't have the uh *ahem* cup size to back it up. And it also looks like he has bewbs. So answer pls?

Cass. Wyvern

What it lacks in attractive artistic style it really makes up for in all the story elements. Not to mention all the time its had to world build. It's great. Plus that one page where Dr. Bowman and the director guy and Flo are done in a super detailed style is amazing and I'm happy with just that.

Cass. Wyvern

This is a goood one :P

OneFluffyBoi

Florence is so cute

Spartan277

That wasn't me Torque. =P

McClaw

Don't be too hard on yourself, Leno Nite. It's easy (and with some trolls, deliberate) to misunderstand or misinterpret what gets said. Sometimes it helps to say only what's necessary.

McClaw

I note they swapped bodies -- but not clothes. So we have Florence's mind in Natani's body wearing Florence's clothes, and then Natani's mind in Florence's body wearing -- something. So Florence is half right, Natani is taking off the clothes on Florence's body although they're probably what Natani originally was wearing.

Catsnightmare

Natani gets one look at Sam's real face and she'll beg to go back to her own body/world to get away from the tentacled horror.

arcantos

Flo's actually very feminine, once she got fitting clothes Im sure she would be all for the swap

DarthLeonite

Ah, well, crap. I see my words have been misinterpreted. I was saying that I liked how Tom drew the free fall characters, because it makes them feel a little more real to me. I’m sorry to all of you who mistook my words. I shall delete my earlier comment. Also, if the goal of all of you was to make me feel guilty, it worked. Bleh. I regret what I said, because looking back on it, I can see why all of you would be angry about what I said. So again, I am deeply sorry, and I will refrain from commenting about other people’s artwork in comparison, especially when I have limited knowledge of the other comic.

Muddypaws

Rocket Raccoon? 😋

Thisguy

Oh come on, where would Natani get a rocket launcher? Florence is far more likely to have explosives, she’s a nuclear technician. And she knows Sam Starfall.

Piedunk

I have to agree with Bill. It's a really dickish move to say Tom's better at Freefall than Mark is, and frankly it's just not true. Putting aside the difference in artistic styles, production times, personal focus as an artist, and so much more, it's just asinine to look at two very experienced artists who have been drawing for literal decades and say that one is inadequate at his own work.

Kaija

personally, from the few last page I read, it seems pretty funny 'w' ! But I grown up with Garfield and other minimalist Comics X3

Thisguy

I love Freefall, not for the art, but for the characters, story and setting. It’s really interesting to see the thought that has gone into the world building, and especially the literal world building by the characters, as they live in a colony on a planet in the middle of terraforming.

Shadowkey392

Just don’t start feeling yourself, Natani!

Blu3wolf

Pretty much the height of rudeness though to say that because you dislike the art or story of Freefall, that that makes Tom better at Freefall that the author is. Saying afterwards you arent hating on it? You're an asshole - no offense.

Blu3wolf

There isnt much story for the first 200 strips or so, but there is one now.

TorqueEmPup

Also I was friends with a guy in high school named Josh Stewart, we were in a Information Technology class together. Kinda stopped talking about a year or so after we graduated and went our separate ways.

TorqueEmPup

To each their own. Considering FreeFall has been going since the 90s, 3 strips a week. Mark Stanley has been doing the comic ad free, and free of charge since the beginning, only in the last year or so has he setup a Patreon, but he doesn't really use it. But still updates the comic 3 times a week. I can see though where it wouldn't be for everyone, but judging the quality of a comic by the art quality isn't quite fair.

Spartan277

I saw it, gave it a read, couldn't get into it at all either. I have less of a hard time when someone with great skill out draws someone else, what I find inexcusable is when someone does something like draw a las lindas comic (not one worth reading frankly any more) character and absolutely shows just how terrible the art style or lack there of has become as of late.

DarthLeonite

Bleh. There goes my hopes. I went and checked out Freefall, and found I couldn’t get into the art style or the characters. I don’t want to hate on Freefall, though, because I know people do love that comic. I apologize if my comment offends anyone, but I wanted to share my thoughts

Mīonikoī

DOGGIE!

SCD

Florence: And I want my old body back now! Natani: Nope, it’s mine now and to make sure of it. She pulls out a rocket launcher and blows her up. Natani: Now this body is mine forever! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Mr Fuzz

i love the reaction of the Twokinds Natani towards the freefall one

Ordithus

Cute!<br>Natani won't be such an effective assassin with the new safeguards (assuming they stay with the body).

DarthLeonite

You need to check the posts. There’s an adorable one of coloured Raine not too long ago 😸

DarthKeidran

I do want to know that. I haven’t read the comic yet so I don’t have a good gauge of Florence’s attitude regarding “Flora-Chestedness”.

Carlysle Brown

This seems like heaven to Nat and hell for Flo.

Republic of Ravenswood

Freefall's always been one of my favorites

Volpethrope

Holy shit my dude

Nakain Rimmel

It is a pretty amazing comic.

Thisguy

Yes, being unable to harm humans would be a bad thing for a professional Assassin.

Luckysniper2424

YES this is the Laugh I needed today thank you

Raine is MY Girlfriend

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Raine is MY Girlfriend

TOM MY NIGGA I'M HERE FOR U

Raine is MY Girlfriend

AAANDDDD THEEEEN I FORGOT IT

Raine is MY Girlfriend

I deactivated the notification for patreon

Raine is MY Girlfriend

FUUUUCK MAN

IvyReed

Now I want to see the consequences of Natani dealing with Florence's safeguards :D

The Sexy Beast

TESTIFY!

FoxDren

I now have to binge read freefall

Jersey Lewis Alcala

Natani's clothes are too big, Florence's clothes are too small.

Vicroc4

You're right that Natani is more grey, but his base color is still brown - just a different shade of brown than Zen.

Pancakes

DOGGY!

Natani Wolf

Ha ha ha so hilarious xD

noxamillion

I'm confused. Natani is a brown wolf? His brother is definitely brown but Natani looks more greyish to me anytime I see him. Please tell me I'm not the only one who sees a color difference between Zen and Nat.

Panther

Maybe no breasts but you're always a female , Natani ^_^" ................ Then what Florence would say to be more breasted now ?

AFallingTree

Just started reading free fall, it’s actually not half bad

DarthKeidran

Technically that’s Florence, In Nat’s Body. She’s Zipping up because she isn’t comfortable with the concept of an exposed chest, especially when actually bearing a humanoid bosom.

InTheLionsDen

With that increase in size Florence in Natani's body will have an even more impressive GRIN when she is trying to be friendly or convincing. Too much teeth?