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SourceBook: Shadowstalker

🕑 Added 2020-04-12 00:50:41 +0000 UTC

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Maxx001

I gush over Red a lot, but Umnus is actually tide with him on my favorite characters of yours. Not only are his powers and race really cool, but he has a design totally unique to the comic. Even without his gorgeous mane, he was a very handsome alien :D Looking forward to his eventual reintroduction to the remade Extinctioners chapters. Really cool to finally get some history on his parents too. A shame those two wont be returning...

Karl Maurer

...holding their breath underwater for a long time... (Though, technically, 'breaths' is also okay, as plural of breath, if that is what you intend there.) But if you say it out loud as you read it, breaths sounds strange there. Looks like you are tight on character space in the Paraphernalia section... other wise I'd recommend it be 'Mystical weapons that are stored on top of his wrist.' As well as adding, 'as well as his standard communication bands and utility belt.' But again, you don't have the space for all that. :)

Ebonyleopard

Thank you. Originally a Dolphin and a bat was his original animal inspiration.

Lang Shu

Between the ears and his face, he actually looks more a turtle with rabbit ears. Like a fusion of the tortoise and the hare. Which only makes his design that much more interesting, in my opinion.