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The Wisdom of Birds (DD4, Chapter Two, pages 73-77)
🕑 Added 2022-10-06 19:35:01 +0000 UTCLast week Alexandra was low enough that she sunk to spending time with the midshipman. This week, she goes to see what the church has to offer her. Plus, she's in the right place at the right time when the governor of the town returns.
(As always, to read completed pages, browse the "DD4" tag.)
I included the churchy pages on a whim. It seemed like an indulgence when I initially wrote it up. But now, I'm pleased with how they turned out and, as I look later into the story, I keep finding ways for this sequence to be relevant.
With the provveditore, I want him to be one of those blustery sacks of ass who swears every other word and speaks in foul turns of phrase, but I don't want to actually put swears into the book, for obvious reasons. I did a few cursory searches to learn about regency-era swearing, but none of it was toothy enough. Most of it wouldn't read as foul language. I think maybe "bull-calf" and "fussock" turned up, and there's one coming next week that I really like (and might install into my day-to-day vocabulary), but otherwise I set myself the task of making things up. "Dragging me up and down the screw" is one of those, and Dear Reader? I like that one.
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Chapter Two wraps up over the next two weeks! Where will Alexandra find solace? How much deeper will her conflict with her mother become? How will she celebrate her birthday? Soon we will find out!
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TC
Comments
Lisa
The swearing made me think he was vaguely navyish; as in, he once tried to join the navy but washed out because he was too seasick. (When you're rich and from an influential family, they let you do what you want.) Now he curses in vaguely nautical inspired blustery curses.
Jana
Fat Fussock is a pretty great no swear swear!
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