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Tides from the Deep - Chapters 21-30
🕑 Added 2024-09-14 09:51:25 +0000 UTCChapter 21 – Teamwork Makes the Dreamwo
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Cinera Verinia
1. You can only get initiated in the Deep.
Cinera Verinia
Ugh, I really don't like how Fiora is being handled.
Pholt
"wondering about who might her stab in the back" her stab -> stab her
Pholt
"Riala nodded, quite confused, afraid, but also heartened that someone would treat her with such familiarity." Riala -> Talia
Touch
I find it both convenient and cliche how every time someone important appears, a random student shouted their name.
SecondBlahm
Hello, thx for the story ! There is a few things that are not clear to me: The first is during the attack on the island. Woudn't all the people that killed abyssal scuttlers be initiated ? Why isn't it talked about and why not one of them chose to go to the academy ? Why do people stay uninitated when there are weak Monsters to kill. A lot of people could be initiated with the assistance from relative or other friendly water rider. Second is during the test on the boat. The prof is killing teens unopposed ? It's said that those that don't pass the test do not survive. Is it only Talia's view ? I don't see people, riders or not, accepting 90% of temnagers killed even for the pride of one man.
Maeve McCarthy
Damn it, I somehow messed up with the numbers again. I'll correct it. It's not supposed to look like that.
Aclys
Keanu Reefs
Onyxdragon666
+0.7 to your Constitution (2.6/2 to 1 Constitution)] -> +0.7 to your Constitution (2.6/2 Constitution)] makes more sense if I understand the leveling/siphon system.
