jjj6
patreon
Bali's Late Day
🕑 Added 2024-02-07 19:26:59 +0000 UTCI think a lot of people can relate to Baltimore's waking up late every day...
I'm happy to finally bring this to you all! This was the big project I've been working on for 8 months now! I've finally made my first attempt at doing manga style paneling! I know it's not quite a manga, but I definitely tried to be as close as possible! The hardest part was figuring out the paneling for it all and how to make it blend together, hence why it took so long. I also had some issues with the characters used here, but I did manage to fix them for the most part. I have an idea for a sequel comic for Baltimore later down the road, if you guys like this one enough!
Btw, Baltimore is from a series called Azure Lane. I've never read it myself, but her character design was interesting so I really wanted to use her for this piece!
Some notes about this story:
I had the basic concept of the story mapped out, but the details didn't come to me as easily as I thought they would. It's always tricky writing for characters you don't really know a lot about or have any background information for them. It's one of the reasons I stopped using my DOA models.
During the scene in front of the school gate, I was supposed to have a car drive by and almost see her, but I couldn't quite get that to look good due to it being a still image. I'm hoping my editing skills will improve enough one day so that I can make my shots look more dynamic.
While I'm not a particular fan of the "naked with shoes" side of ENF, I figured I rarely do it, so this could be something good for those who enjoy that concept. Speaking of... Ignore the fact that I forgot her socks during the final part. I forgot which version of the model I was using and realized it too late XD
If I do another attempt at a manga style comic, I'm gonna let the paneling flow naturally to me instead of trying to plan it out, which is why this took so long to finish.
Comments
jjj6
Or she ends up exposing more of her body because of it XD I'm glad you came up with these because I was drawing a serious blank XD
jjj6
I may not know a thing about azure lane, but I think this will lead into some fun adventures down the road! And thank you! XD I already have a potential sequel in mind!
D3D
Something tells me the class prez is going to go to great lengths to find the Naked Bag Girl's identity. Hope she and Bali don't have gym together or Bali might be put on her suspects list. Or go to a hotsprings on a class trip and Bali's towel slips off briefly and the prez catches a glimpse and that causes her to start formulating plans to see Bali nude again to confirm her suspicions like Bali loosing her swimsuit at the beach or pool...đ€...Your comic has me brainstorming ideas about a series I know next to nothing about I can't think of a better compliment than that!đđ
D3D
As for the matter of her socks I'm just gonna headcanon that she took them off because hardwood gym floors can be slippery enough as is and since she was leaving her shoes (and the friction they would've provided) behind as part of her plan, If she was running at her top speed the possibility of her slipping at some point would only be higher if she kept her socks on since its easier to glide and slide on hardwood floor when wearing socks (I speak from personal experience) than barefoot. Imagine during her streak that she slipped and fell and the paper bag came flying off or if she kept sliding and crashed into the seats where her classmates were or what if - Bali: STOP IMAGINING STUFF...!!!đĄ
