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Mari's Rough Morning
🕑 Added 2024-06-21 18:34:20 +0000 UTCWas reviewing over this comic again realized I forgot one panel during the Kagami scene! Don't know how I missed it entirely, but sorry you guys didn't see it! Enjoy the missing content!
Someone should check to see if that one guy is okay...
I've returned with maybe my longest enf story yet at 153 panels (counting the uncensored version)! I finished this story literally 3 months to the day of when I began it! It was NEVER intended to be this long, but I guess when an artist has a vision, it tends to be far bigger than they ever anticipated. I'm so glad to be done with this project, despite how fun it was to work on. Now I can finally work on something I've been putting off for over a year now. Hopefully you guys will enjoy that piece when I get done with it. For now though, enjoy this very long story about Marinette!
Author's notes:
1. This legit all started because I wanted a story about Marinette falling out of her shirt. Never would have thought such a simple concept would become such a big undertaking.
2. I think this is the best showcasing of my updated Marinette model, compared to the previous two entries I did, which is ironic since she's covering her chest for a majority of the story lol.
3. I did have some trouble with Juleka's model when I started using her. I didn't realize at all she couldn't move her eyes, so the shots with her had to be short and very limited. I could have made her eyes work, but I was super tired from working on this for so long and really wanted to hurry up, so I worked with what I had.
4. The whole Kagami scene was simply because I wanted to add some humor and I saw that my editing program had some interesting effects that I really wanted to try out. Overall, I think that whole scene worked out pretty well!
5. One of the reasons this comic took three months, besides of course irl stuff such as work and family, is that the lighting effects in MMD are very fickle, as is having the camera set exactly where you need it to be. The two sort of work against each other, which required me making a note document of the lighting effect values so that I could remember which scenes needed what light values.
6. One of the reasons I haven't shown Sabine Cheng's full face is the same reason I didn't show Alya, Adrien, or Chloe's in "Marinette's Narrow Escape". Their style of faces all match my old Marinette model (Who I plan to use in future works still), so I didn't want them to contrast with the style of the canon models. Since I have access to Sabine now though, I'll be trying to incorporate her into future works with my other Marinette as well.
Comments
jjj6
The curse of the writer's heavy hand lol
jjj6
Thanks man! Really appreciate that!
D3D
Anyway fantastic work on the storytelling front and the technical stuff like lighting and shading. And its an excellent showcase for the Marinette model too. The bod looks good and her expressions are great. As always looking forward to your next piece. 👍👍
D3D
Ideas always start out simple and once you start brainstorming and adding to it just naturally snowballs into something bigger than what you originally planned. Its how alot of my stories end up and its how you end up with a Tifa enf story that around 20 pages and still only part 1 XD. Its a blessing and a curse XD
