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Sorcery and Seduction Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2024-10-05 19:02:01 +0000 UTC

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yan boul

Yep but good shades is an obstacle where Coven can start to prove itself I believe his Susan who wins in the pool. she can tell him about the political power of his family who can help him against the ministry and Voldemort seen who is on this plane too and money too.

OmegonFlair

I’m still not sure how much I should focus on Umbridge in this story, wanting Harry’s primary goal to get stronger to face Voldemort. Thanks for the support!

OmegonFlair

Thanks for the feedback! I’m trying to make part of Harry’s character him being worried about Voldemort, and the danger he poses to society, so in turn he wants everyone to learn to defend themselves at the minimum. I figured repetition would be good, for him to drill this down, but I’ll take your advice for my writing in the future!

LT Butterfly287

All I really got to say about this chapter is that when Harry was convincing everyone to ban together and learn DADA, he repeated that danger is coming and we need to know how to defend ourselves around 5 times. Just kind of took me out of the scene because all he did was repeat himself with slightly different wording.

Erinnyes

Excellent chapter!

yan boul

Like his stupid rule of no more than 3 per group in their community room in their class (what they will eat) the class changes all of the examples (why this rule should never have worked in movies and books) . the same for the ban on quidditch especially for life she never had this power to make do not know are department and there was no investigation do you think that the other league will accept her

yan boul

Beautiful staging in addition the it we do not talk about Voldemort but the rotten quality of teacher that is shade she will try but her will put it down even more and I don't see them have a group name that goes with the name of Dumbledore.


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