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Maturity of Magic Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2025-01-08 21:06:45 +0000 UTC

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yan boul

But if we want Harry to stop walking on his feet he will have to assert himself more as an adult especially with the company that likes to hold but knows his beauty of the comments and critics well done his help to improve you

Sin Hunter

When you get to your DC crossover story I’d only ask you to put Starfire in Harry’s harem. She has so much potential as a romantic partner and there’s very few stories with her in a crossover pairing.

travis btmb

Tftc great job I can't wait to see Amelia ,narcissa and Julia heavy with child harry face will be priceless

OmegonFlair

That’s a fair critique, and I’ll keep your words in mind for future chapters. I guess my main thought process this chapter was that Harry was tired from the previous events and didn’t feel like arguing with anyone

Erinnyes

Cute and a lot of fun.

yan boul

I can't wait to read your crossover with dc quent you'll do it I hope who will have a beautiful woman with him like kara, zantanna, crow and more her interesting girls

Jerome Gerlach

I am happy for the update, but come on can you make harry at least somewhat more assertive and taking no shit from anyone? I mean what right does McGonagall has to judge, given that over the years she hardly did anything to help. More confidence would be nice and kinda appropriate given everthing he did. What greater accomplishment is there then banging a hot older women. I swear I would be feeling as if I was the king of the world and not behave so meek when People who have no right to, start to judge me for it. But otherwise nice story and can't wait for the crossover


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