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Whirlwind in Time Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2025-01-18 20:44:12 +0000 UTC

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Jay

It probably feels OC because there's so many wierd things. Like, a French ICW agent shows up out of no where and happens to be a Veela, he's powerful and strong willed enough to resist the dark arts he's been practicing but not enough to resist a Veela, he keeps calling Emily Riddle Voldemort but that anagram for Tom Marvolo Riddle, and there's no real showing of her gathering troops.

HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR

Welp, Harry should've been able to throw off the allure and put Apolline in her place. So yeah, you're right about the story probably getting too OC. Also, it makes no sense that Harry would even consider Riddle as a romantic partner when he know full well that she's Voldemort and he needs to kill her. That should probable get fixed if you ever come back to this story.

Shammy2618

Please tell me you have plans to update this story? Heartbreaking to see it end here when it is starting to get really interesting.

Arkhaan

Well that was very unsatisfying. She flagrantly manipulates his mind with him being aware of her manipulation and he can’t even muster enough willpower to be angry about it? That makes this Harry come across as incredibly weak

Rogue

Interesting development between Harry and Apolline.

Daeron Targaryen

Well seems someone has a crush


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