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Peek Behind The Curtain (Unpublished Futanari Script)
🕑 Added 2022-01-19 15:31:00 +0000 UTCThis isn't my normal posts so bare with me, but this is a script I had submitted to a (I think) now defunct comic company. Needless to say, they never paid me for the script and they said I was free to product it myself. So for your reading pleasure, have a look. I'll put out a separate poll for producer tier folks to see if I should indeed make it into a 3D comic.
This was a while ago, I haven't edited it or anything like that since I submitted it, so apologies for any formatting or grammatical issues. I'm posting this more because a few of you have asked me about the comic writing process. Also be aware this does involve some light Futa on Male, though it's more focused on the general futanari transformation.
TITLE: Thysa Reborn
Synopsis:The Drunken Moon approaches. For most of Denise's village it is just a festival like any other in Ancient Greece, yet for her mother and the member's of Dionysus' sex cult, it is an awakening generations in the making. None would guess the power lying dormant beneath the wives' togas. For whenever men found themselves taking for granted their lovers, or worse denying their lovers their sexual needs, Dionysus' favored daughter, Thysa, would rise up amongst the mortals. She would bring with her a raging lust and provide the women of the village the toolsto sate it. It is Denise's 18thbirthday, and she will soon discover what it means to wield the power of a demi-goddess between her thighs.
Tags:futanari, mini-giantess, breast expansion, muscle growth, size comparison, magic
CHARACTERS
Denise/Thysa: As Denise, she is an athletic 18 year old. She is scrawny, the body of a runner, initially 5'5 with B cup breasts. She has short black hair and bronzed skin and wears a Greek leather top and skirt (REFERENCE: Leather skirt: https://i.imgur.com/20lU21Q.jpg). In her Thysa form, she is 8 feet tall, the muscles of a hunter or warrior, with massive breasts (REFERENCE: https://i.imgur.com/hAiCZjW.jpg) and wide hips. Her hair grows longer and wilder. Her cock, when flaccid is thick and easily a foot long; when erect it is truly titanic – she could easily suck herself off without trying too hard. She is also a futnari, in the sense that she has both male and female genitalia, her cock for the most part obscures her vagina, rising out of her labia where her clitoris would typically be. Thysa also sports a pair of fawn antlers (REFERENCE: https://i.imgur.com/SxtI2yb.jpg).
Cly: Cly is a young Greek boy about Denise's age. He is fit but not overly muscular and stands about 5'8.
Rhea/EMC: Denise's mother, Rhea, bares a familial resemblance to her daughter, though she has distinctive curves. She is in her early forties, though her hair remains black, pulled back into a bun. She wears white, Greek robes. She is about the same height as Cly at 5'8 with C cup breasts. In her EMC persona she is more amazonian in build, closer to 6'0 with more toned muscle. Her breasts are in the D cup range. When the ritual begins, she does not have a cock, though she has one by the time she confronts her husband.
Hebe: Hebe is about Denise and Cly's age, though she is initially very petite. She is light skinned with golden hair. Throughout her ritual she grows to 9'0, much more muscular (REFERENCE: https://imgur.com/a/9d7ksF3), and grows a cock easily 12 inches long.
Denise's Father: Denise's father is in his mid-forties, salt and pepper hair. He has the body of a retired football player. He may have once been a warrior, but those days are long gone.
Marcus: Marcus is timid and meek. He is Greek, with dark hair.
COVER
It is night, Thysa stands amongst her devotees and admirers. A fire builds behind her. She looks down hungrily to the reader, her erect cock rages with a thick vein running along the shaft. It two feet long, pressing against the bottom portion of her breasts. If we can't show penises on the cover, have Cly stumbling on the ground in the foreground with his back to the reader, covering up the area between her legs.
LOCATIONS
- The comic takes place in a Mediterranean village (REFERENCE: Mediterranean Village: https://i.imgur.com/0ETLrW6.jpg) both in the city center and out more into the country side. Small, gnarly trees and grass grow outside the city.
- Denise's home is a modest Greek villa. It is in a Mediterranean style.
- The market place is a typical open air market for the time,(REFERENCE: Open Air Market: https://i.imgur.com/Hjxe83o.png) the main stall focused on in the comic is one selling tapestries. Other than the ones noted, the tapestries can be whatever is easiest, so long as they're in a greek style. (REFERENCE: Greek Style Tapestries: https://i.imgur.com/6aInOxS.jpg)
PAGE ONE (five panels)
Panel 1
In sepia tones, as if a memory or the distant past. A circle of Greek women gather around a fire in the wilderness beneath a full moon. They are scantily clad in leather or completely naked.
CAPTION
"And so during a Drunken Moon—much like the one rising over us now—devotees of Dionysus gathered..."
Panel 2
Thysa rises triumphantly from within the circle, The other women barely come up to her nipples. She is a demi-goddess—larger and more spectacular than the mortals worshiping her. Thysa's head is craned back as if she howls at the moon. Her cock is flaccid but hangs heavily along her thigh, easily 12 inches. Women around her are transforming-- growing larger breasts and cocks. One grabs her breasts in amazement as they have tripled in size.
CAPTION
"...to call forth Thysa, his first daughter and goddess of sexual liberation, to seek justice for patriarchal wrongdoings."
Panel 3
Still in sepia. Thysa and a group of similarly transformed devotees of Dionysus are in a Greek storeroom. Thysa, in her full form, looms above everyone. She is starring down at a cowering man, who lies on the ground desperately back pedaling. Her massive cock is erect and lined with a potent vein. She has both hands on her hips in a power pose, a sinister grin upon her face as she sizes up her prey. Her cock twitches in anticipation, pre-cum glistening the tip.
CAPTION
"Her vengeance was swift and powerful."
Panel 4
Back in regular tones. Denise, Cly, and an old woman are in a Greek market. They stand in an open tent just off the main bazaar. Behind them are tapestries hanging. The old woman bares a striking resemblance to a devotee seen in Panel 3, as if she were recounting a memory from her much younger days. The old woman cackles to herself, clasping her hands while Cly looks on in terror. Denise's shoulders hunched, her arms up. She mocks Cly, pretending to be a monster.
OLD WOMAN
Or so the stories go. Probably nonsense.
DENISE
Better be a gentleman Cly, or else Thysa will come and have her way with you!
Panel 5
A smaller panel, Cly and Denise are walking down the street. Denise playfully punches Cly's arm. He smiles sheepishly.
DENISE
Don't worry, I'll protect you from the big, scary women.
PAGE 2 (four panels)
Panel 1
It is now dusk. The view is from behind Rhea. She waves out a window from within their home toward Denise and Cly. They are in the country side outside the denser city. Denise is coming off the main street, while Cly continues down the road. Grass and trees line the other side of the road.
DENISE'S MOM
Cly is that you? I hardly recognize you, you've grown so much.
DENISE
Ew Mom, besides you saw him last month.
Panel 2
Rhea has a hand on Denise's back, warmly smiling down on her. Denise does not appreciate the fussing.
DENISE'S MOM
A lot can happen in a month.
(Continued)
Like your birthday this weekend!
Panel 3
In the kitchen, Denise's dad lounges at the table, unceremoniously eating a leg of lamb. He's condescending, chuckling to himself. Rhea stands behind Denise, with both hands on her daughter's shoulders defensively. Denise's eyes well up as she tries to hold back tears.
DENISE'S FATHER
Is that this weekend? Good, the sooner you come of age, the sooner we can sell you off to Barthus.
RHEA
Now is not the appropriate time to be haggling the price of our daughter. At least wait until after her birthday!
Panel 4
Denise is bolting from the kitchen, her hands covering her face as she begins to cry. Rhea reaches out for her daughter, but does not stop her. Her father belts out a laugh, holding his stomach.
DENISE'S FATHER
The Drunken Moon is the perfect time to catch him off guard. The fool will pay any coin when he's got wine in him.
RHEA
How could you say such things in front of our daughter!
PAGE 3 (four panels)
Panel 1
Night as fallen. Denise cradled her legs as she sits on her bed. A noise rouses her, her face peering through her knees.
DENISE
Go away! I'm not hungry!
DEVOTEE (OP)
You will be, little one.
Panel 2
Startled, Denise looks up, still holding her knees to her chest. Her eyes are wide with terror. Obscured by shadows is a woman of Amazonian stature, wearing a leather top and skirt (REFERENCE: Wonder woman outfit: https://i.imgur.com/66Mr8xN.jpg). The woman wears a partial mask of a doe: the upper half of her face obscured, a smile quirked on her face. The woman holds a length of rope in her hands, readying to abscond with Denise.
DEVOTEE #1
It is time Denise.
DENISE
Wait, what are you doing?!
Panel 3
The largest of the panels. Denise stands on the floor, she has punched the woman. The woman, though taller and more muscular bends over, a hand touching her jaw gingerly, it is bruised. She clicks her jaw, more impressed then hurt. Denise's fist is clenched, she sneers. She doesn't realize another Amazonian, with E cup breasts and wearing a similar garb, is sneaking up behind her.
DEVOTEE #1
Impressive.
DENISE
My mom taught me how to fight. I won't be easy prey.
DEVOTEE #2
I would hope not. You'll need to be strong for what comes next.
Panel 4
Devotee #2 has her in a bear hug, Denise's head pressed between the woman's breasts. Denise's eyes are wide, her teeth gritting as she struggles to no avail. Devotee #1 has a black bag that she is about to slip over Denise's head.
DENISE
Let. Me. GO!
DEVOTEE #1
Soon little one, soon.
PAGE 4 (four panels)
Panel 1
The largest of the panels. Denise is panting on all fours. She's in an underground cave, torches lining the room. Beside her are girls about her age, all seemingly snatched in the night. The ones in night gowns are scared, looking around anxiously. In the front of the row of girls walks an Amazon larger than the previous two devotees-- in muscularity, and height. She wears a similar deer mask, though hers has a young fawn's antlers, rather than a doe. With one hand she guides an especially petite girl-- Hebe-- who wears a gladiator-esc leather top and skirt, up a set of naturally forming steps in the cave towards a ritual alter.
EMC
It is time you learn our village's truth. The true power of the Drunken Moon and how we are meant to rule it.
Panel 2
On the ritual alter, a naked, muscular man is chained down. The petite girl straddles him, she holds his erect cock in both hands. it's average sized-- no more than six inches. He is eying the girl, licking his lips lecherously. The EMC has a reassuring hand on the girl's shoulder, both women are looking down at his cock.
HEBE
I'm scared!
MAN #1
Don't worry, I'll be gentle.
EMC
He's right. There's nothing to fear.
Panel 3
The girl rides the man in a cow-girl pose. Their attributes transfer begins. He has lost 10% of his height and muscularity, while she gains it. Her breasts are now C cups. She cups them with both hands as she moans in pleasure. A faint, glowing aura surrounds her, drawing energy from him. The first nub of a boner can be seen growing from within her skirt, though no flesh is visible.
HEBE
So...big...fuck
MAN #1
You ready to take it all?
Panel 4
From beneath Hebe's leather skirt, the head of her penis emerges. While erect and twitching, it is still small, 3 inches long. The man has lost 33% of his height and muscularity. The girl is soaking it in, growing taller and roughly in the muscular range of a crossfit/rock climber. Her breasts are D cups. The man watches the girl's growing penis in horror. Hebe grabs the man's chains as if they were horse's reins, pulling them tight as she rides the man.
MAN #1
What in the name of Zeus?!
HEBE
Zeus can't help you now.
PAGE 5 (four panels)
Panel 1
The girl is now closing in on 6'0, while the man is barely 5'0. The man is shrimpy now. He has grown so small that his hand is able to slip the cuff. Hebe massages her breast with one hand, the other begins to work her cock, now six inches long. The girl continues to fuck him in a cowgirl pose. Her breasts in the E cup range. She is making eye contact with him.
HEBE
Are you ready to take it all?
Panel 2
From the same view but Hebe continues to grow larger as the man shrinks. Hebe has caught the man's wrist, pinning him to the alter. Most noticeably, the girl's cock is easily ten inches long and thick. She is bent over to be face to face with him; masturbating while fucking him, a pool of pre-cum drenches the man's body and her breasts. She cranes her neck up, mouth agape as she moans with pleasure.
HEBE
Oh goddess! This is-- ungh-- incredible!
Panel 3
Hebe rises up, so she is perpendicular with the table, both hands are on her large cock. Cum spouts from it, drenching the struggling man.
Panel 4
The largest panel. The EMC is on the lower level of the cave, a hand outstretched to help Hebe--now a glorious futanari Amazon-- down off the alter's raised area. We get a full view of the transformed girl. She is buff and glistening. Her cock is erect and still drips cum. What little of the man is visible is small, adolescent almost. The EMC is not as tall as Hebe, but she has grown taller, more muscular, and bustier since her previous sighting.
EMC
Awaken daughter of Dionysus. With each of your transformations we grow larger, more powerful. Together.
PAGE 6 (five panels)
Panel 1
Denise stands to the side of the alter. The EMC is behind her, both hands on her shoulders. The panel cuts off at the EMC's shoulders. Her massive breasts are the primary focus. The two women look down at a new man chained to the alter. Whether by nature or from the previous man's experience, he is much more timid. He is average build, with an eight inch cock. Denise is hesitant, nervously eying the man.
MAN #2
Hey, you said we were just going to have a little fun!
EMC
I believe the words I used were "you'd be a little fun."
(Continue)
Take his power Denise, call forth the power you know lies within you.
Panel 2
Denise is fucking the man, both of her hands on his chest. Her focus though is on one of the Amazonian women. The voluptuous woman wears a leather bikini (REFERENCE: Slave Leia: https://i.imgur.com/8isJKO9.png), a cock's bulge growing beneath. The woman is running her hands down her growing hips, engrossed in the sensation. The EMC speaks behind Denise. Denise for her part has begun to drawn energy from the man and grow. In the background of the panel is a cavernous exit leading to a darkened, winding tunnel.
EMC (OP)
Yes Denise! Make us grow!
Panel 3
The focus shifts two Amazonian women standing by the cavernous exit. They have become preoccupied with feeling their growing breasts and jerking off their newly sprouted cocks. Denise is not on panel.
CAPTION
“Now's my chance!”
Panel 4
Denise is leaping through the air, her body already curling into a roll before she hits the ground. She is bolting between the two entrance guards, who are completely consumed with their cocks and breasts, which have continued to swell.
DENISE (thought)
I've got to get out of here and warn Cly!
Panel 5
Close on view. The EMC has a hand on the shoulder of the recently transformed girl --Hebe-- stopping her. Her other hand is removing her mask, revealing the mother's face. The panel cuts off just below their breasts.
HEBE
The transformation must be complete.
EMC
Fear not. Once unleashed, the hunger only grows. Especially for that one. There will be no escaping it.
PAGE 7 (four panels)
Panel 1
In the foreground, Denise hides behind a wooden crate in the market. She wears a toga, though her breasts are clearly in the C cup range. The village has descended into chaos; a crate lies toppled, fruit spilled along the street. The panel's focus is Hebe, who stalks the streets after a young man her age, Marcus—though he is not on panel. The woman has an erection, easily 10 inches long, proportionately thick, and dripping pre-cum. She wears leather underwear, like a strap-on harness, except its her actual dick coming through the hole.
HEBE
Don't run Marcus, it's me. I promise, let me show you.
DENISE (thought)
Hera, they've already made it into town.
Panel 2
Focus on Hebe and Marcus. Hebe has a hand pressed against the wall of a building as she leans against it. Her other hand strokes her erect penis, which has risen up along her abs. She looks down hungrily at Marcus. He can't peel his eyes away from her massive cock. His own erection grows beneath his robes, petite by comparison.
MARCUS
B-but yours is so much bigger Hebe!
HEBE
That's what makes this fun Marcus! Besides, I showed you mine-- it's only fair you show me yours.
Panel 3
Hebe leans down to kiss Marcus passionately, their lips millimeters from each other. Her breasts pin him to the wall. Their cocks are parallel with each other, though Marcus's cock is barely four inches long, even erect. Hebe has a hand behind his ass, the other is stroking her own cock at its base.
HEBE
Worship my cock Marcus, tell me how much you need it.
Panel 4
Marcus sucks on Hebe's nipple as she clamps his head to her breast with one hand. Her other hand is out of view but is grabbing his lower back, pressing him closer to her. Marcus has both hands encircling her cock, stroking furiously. Another good comparison shot of the two's drastically different physiques.
HEBE
Yes, use both hands, make me cum Marcus!
PAGE 8 (four panels)
Panel 1
Denise is backing away into a dark alley, a Cly is seen behind her, also backing up and unaware of his friend. The two are about to bump into each other.
DENISE (thought)
Hebe really let that growth go to her head....well both of them actually. I better be careful.
Panel 2
Cly and Denise spin around. Cly sputters putting his hands up in a defensive position as he cowers. Denise on the other hand is in a fighter's stance, fists raised and ready.
CLY
Gah!
DENISE
Don't touch me--
(Continued)
Oh Cly, it's just you.
Panel 3
Cly is in the foreground, he has his hands on his knees, panting. Denise has her hands on her hips, glaring at him.
CLY
Don't worry Denise, I'll protect you.
DENISE
You protect me, heh?
Panel 4
In the foreground, Cly has his hands on the side of a building. He is not paying attention to Denise. Rather, he looks guardedly around the building for threats. Denise, standing behind him, has grown a half a foot with her breasts in the D cup range. Her hands are still on her hips, but her expression has changed. She has a teasing expression on her face, yet now she eyes Cly from behind with a growing lust. She bites her lower lip. From her forehead, two small horn nubs can be seen pressing against against her flesh, not yet exposed. Denise's clit is also enlarged, pressing against the fabric of her robes at roughly the size of a big toe, the first hints of her cock to come.
DENISE
I came back to save you. Though clearlyI was mistaken.
CLY
We don't have time for this, we need to find the old woman's tapestries. They'll tell us what to do.
PAGE 9 (four panels)
Panel 1
Scene shifts. Rhea/EMC has come home. She has wrapped herself in a toga and looks like her normal form— subservient and meek. She knocks on the door to her home, her husband in the other side. The panel is looking towards the door, her husband peers out a carved window in the door, hesitant to let her in.
RHEA/EMC
Dear husband, please don't leave me out with these monsters!
DENISE'S FATHER
Rhea is that you? What is going on?
Panel 2
Rhea's husband tentatively opens the door, cowering behind it. Rhea is still putting on the facade of the meek housewife. Another man is in their house, Barthus, who peers out from behind the kitchen table, hiding-- despite being inside the home.
BARTHUS
M-my wife. She came home sex-crazed and...with a cock larger than mine.
RHEA
Oh my, how heinous to have a horny wife. But I must ask you...
Panel 3
Rhea has ripped off her toga revealing her naked form. Her cock is semi-erect, but already easily six inches long.
RHEA
...was it larger than mine?
Panel 4
Rhea spins around, pinning her husband to the wall. While he is more muscular than her, they are almost the same height. Her penis is full mast, as is his. Her husband's cock is 8 inches, an inch longer than Rhea's, though they are of comparable thickness.
RHEA
Glad to see I still turn you on after all these years.
PAGE 10 (four panels)
Panel 1
Still pinning her husband with one hand on his chest, Rhea points an accusatory finger at Barthus, who is trying to escape.
RHEA
And where do you think you're going? I still have a pussy that needs fucking. Or are you truly as dickless as you seem?
Panel 2
Rhea palms her husbands head as he goes down on her, barely taking more than a few inches of her length. She massages her breasts, consumed with pleasure as Barthus fucks her from behind, both hands on her hips. Growth has begun, the mother drawing energy and size from both men.
RHEA
Your mouth is incredible. We've been missing out on so much fun all these years.
Panel 3
Barthus and her husband have lost almost half their height and muscularity, though the mother is capping off her height below 7'0 and is not overly muscular. Her cock bulges in her husbands mouth as he strains against its swelling size, now almost double what it had been on PAGE 9 Panel 3. Her husband's cock is still erect, but now closer to 4 inches, dripping pre-cum. She has both hands on his head.
RHEA
Yes, yes! I'm so close!
Panel 4
Barthus has fallen to the ground, now too short to even reach her hips. Similarly her husband has collapsed against the wall gasping for air as he wipes his mouth. He stares in transfixed amazement at his wife's cock. Without missing a beat she begins working her shaft. His erection is full mast, though dwarfed by her huge cock. The full moon's light beams through the window, though it has an amber hue to it.
RHEA
Even the goddess can't change some things. Looks like I'll have to finish myself.
(Continued)
And not a moment too soon, the final ritual is upon us.
PAGE 11 (four panels)
Panel 1
Denise and Cly have fled to the market where they find the old woman's tapestry stall. Cly and Denise search through hanging pictures. The one hanging in front of Cly shows the fully transformed Thysa, her cock raging as devotees bow around her. Again, Thysa bears a striking resemblance to Denise-- though more mature and larger. Denise's back is to the viewer, but she is hunched over, hands clasping her stomach.
DENISE
Cly, I don't feel well.
CLY
Hold on, I found it! Thysa's reincarnation.
Panel 2
Focusing on Denise. She looks down in horror. Her breasts are in the DD range, but most shocking is the outline of a cock running down her leg. Her hands are covering her mouth, holding back a scream.
CLY (OP)
"When men grow neglectful of their wives' needs, Thysa chooses one girl to be her vessel..."
Panel 3
Denise is now around 6'0. Though not on panel, Cly comes up to her chin. She is also putting on more muscle, in the fit/tone range rather than Amazonian at this stage. Her penis, now about 6 inches erect, presses out against her skirt. One hand is still covering her mouth, the other more exploratory hand, moves towards her erection. Her eyes are wide with realization.
CLY (OP)
"...The greater the neglect, the greater she grows."
(Continued)
Well the men here aren't neglectful right?
Panel 4
Denise's has grabbed hold of her cock, eight inches long now. Her eyes flash amber with a supernatural glow, as if she is channeling the moon's power. A faint aura surrounds her. She gasps in exhilaration. Her other hand clasps her breast. She continues to grow taller, around 6'4 now with the musculature of a cross-fit competitor (REFERENCE: Cross-fit competitor: https://i.imgur.com/PbJq5A3.jpg) and prominent breasts. Fawn's antlers have sprouted from her head (REFERENCE: Fawn's antlers: https://i.imgur.com/SxtI2yb.jpg).
CLY (OP)
Right Denise?
PAGE 12 (four panels)
Panel 1
The scene shifts back to Rhea. She looms over her husband. She had one foot planted on his shoulder. He is on all fours, looking up in terror at his wife's hefty erection. She has a hand on her hip, one on the base of her cock, pre-cum drips from the tip as she cocks an eyebrow. A faint amber aura surrounds husband and wife. The color of the caption's font is the same amber tone, the font gives odd a mystical vibe.
CAPTION
"For too long the men of this village have taken their women for granted. Be it disrespect..."
Panel 2
Panel 1 and 2 mirror each other. The scene shifts to Hebe. She has continued to grow larger under the dutiful attention of Marcus. She is on her knees jerking herself and Marcus off. Marcus is pressed against the wall of a building, sucking and caressing her breasts. He has shrunk a half a foot, though his cock remains the same size. An amber aura surrounds both.
CAPTION
"...or fear of what society might think. It is now time for the women to take charge."
Panel 3
Back with Denise and Cly. Energy swirls around Denise as the transformation takes hold, her eyes crackle with energy. She stands naked and confident. Her fists are clenched, toned forearms, biceps, abs, and quads on display. Her erection is 10 inches now. Cly has turned around, but plastered himself against the wall, he is looking up at Denise's face. Her ears are a bit longer, she is taking on a more elven appearance. The font of Denise's word bubble is the same as the caption.
DENISE/THYSA
But you don't have to shrink away from this Cly.
CLY
Denise, is that you?
Panel 4
Denise's eyes have returned to normal. She has a vulnerable, timid, expression on her face. She reaches an upturned hand towards Cly, inviting him to take it. Cly is reaching out a hesitant hand in acceptance.
DENISE
Take my hand and join me Cly. If we are together, we need not be consumed by Thysa's lust.
CLY
I would never leave you. No matter what.
PAGE 13 (four panels)
Panel 1
The two stand naked before each other, Denise bending down to kiss him.
Panel 2
Denise pulls Cly in close, their erects press against each other's bodies. Cly's is around 7 inches, while Denise's is now 12 inches. Denise jerks Cly off, while Cly grabs her ass and breasts as the two continue to kiss. Denise is close to 6'6
DENISE (thought)
He feels tiny next to me. Gods this is hot.
Panel 3
Denise is now close to 7'0, her cock over a foot long, a hefty weight to it. She arches her back massaging her breasts. Cly is down on his knees. He has one hand on her cock, readying to start blowing her. With his other hand he jerks himself off.
CLY (Thought)
She's so huge, I don't think i can even fit her in my mouth!
Panel 4
From the same view, but Cly is using both hands to stroke Denise's cock. He is licking pre-cum from her tip. It has grown another three inches longer, its girth increasing proportionately, a vein bulging along the shaft.
CLY (thought)
If her pre-cum tastes this good, I can only imagine what the full load tastes like.
PAGE 14 (four panels)
Panel 1
A side view, Cly is still on his knees going down on the growing Denise. She is just shy of a height and cock length where he can no longer suck her off kneeling without bending the cock down. He is using both hands, his own erection visible. He is on the verge of cumming just from going down on her. Denise has one hand on his head, the other is working her shaft's base.
DENISE
I need you Cly. Fuck me!
Panel 2
Denise leans against a building, the market's tent is next to her for height comparison. It is 8 feet high. She is holding her cock with on hand, pressing it against her body. It runs along her defined abs and up into her cleavage. With her other hand she parts her labia. Cly stands before her, shocked. The panel shows off their size disparity.
DENISE
Fuck me Cly, I'm going to burst if you don't!
Panel 3
Cly fucks Denise while the two face each other. Denise continues to grow taller and more Amazonian. Her cock is at the perfect height for Cly to suck on it as he fucks her. He is wrapping his hands around her cock's shaft, though it is now too large for him to encapsulate completely. Denise has clamped her arms around Cly, digging into his back. She moans in ecstasy. The tent is partially on panel. Amber aura surrounds them both.
DENISE
Your mouth is incredible!
Panel 4
Denise is 8'0 feet tall now, only slightly smaller bust than Thysa in full form, and muscular. But also of note is that Cly is growing taller, now 6'0, and growing more muscular, though no where to Denise's level. His ears also take on an elven point to them, his hair beginning to grow longer and more wild.
DENISE
Gods Cly I'm so close, but it won't stop growing!
PAGE 15 (four panels)
Panel 1
Denise has a hand clawing at Cly's upper back, she has grown to the point that her shoulder is parallel with the tent, and she has grabbed onto it for support. Her body is flush, glistening with sweat, her chest red. Her eyes are clamped shut, her mouth wide open. She is on the verge of orgasm. Cly is now close to 6'5. One of his hands continues to work Denise's shaft, the other grabs her ass as he continues to fuck her. He is looking up at her in adoration, momentarily not sucking her off.
DENISE
I can't hold it back!
CLY
Cum for me my goddess.
Panel 2
Close on view of Cly with both hands clamped on Denise's cock. It twitches violently with the first jet of cum. Cly's cheeks puff out, trying to contain the geyser, though cum is already dripping from his mouth. His eyes are wide.
CLY
*gulp*
Panel 3
Cly has given up trying to contain Denise's cum with his mouth. He grits his teeth, eyes clenched as the first waves of his own orgasm wash over him as he bucks and holds onto her hips for dear life. Denise is cumming a substantial amount, it covers both their chests. She is massaging her breasts with both hands, tit fucking herself.
DENISE
Unngh!
Panel 4
Denise has plopped on the ground, Cly has collapsed into her breasts. Denise's massive cock is growing flaccid, flopped over her quad but still oozing. The tent next to them has collapsed in a heaped mess. Cly looks exhausted, but Denise is looking beyond him. Behind them stands Hebe and Marcus. Hebe's cock is erect, though no where near the size of Denise. Hebe cocks an eyebrow her hands on her hips, looking at the two expectantly.
CLY
That was... amazing.
DENISE
Something tells me the night is just getting started.
Comments
reignsvn
Definitely need to see this
Bacchus Comics
Thank you! My heart broke when the company wasn’t going to publish this script. I’m glad all these years later it’s possible for me to do it on my own (if the Patreon so deems it).
theicemancameth
This is amazing
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