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Transformation Tuesday: Alternative Scene
🕑 Added 2021-11-09 21:40:26 +0000 UTCHere's an alternate view for Page 5 that I ended up not stay with for the final sequence.
What do you think, should I have used this one or did you like the view of Meredith's backside?
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That's a good eye! That was my thinking too. With transformation sequences I try not to jostle the frame of reference too much to really help emphasize the growth. Your point's well taken on the transition between 5 and 6, and I was debating that very point. I've been trying to keep these transformation sequences to no more than 6, or else I've found I really just go down a rabbit hole and end up with a whole comic. But for a comic with dialogue, I think you're right, you'd want a more seamless transition.
reignsvn
Given the previous images/the fact that she was turning away in shyness, the back view fits better with the sequence. If anything, there could be an extra inage between 5 and 6, showing Meredith turning and going towards Jackie in order to pin her in image 6, because the jump from 5 to 6 is too sudden when you look at the previous frames
