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Build-a-Character Comic: Built By Revenge Part II
🕑 Added 2022-04-19 12:00:05 +0000 UTCAfter her peaceful elven village is overrun by hobgoblins, our young elven maiden realizes she will never be strong enough to seek vengeance...unless she's will to make a deal with a devil.
Though initially she thought she'd have to sell her soul, the demon seems interested in something else within the young elf, something that could lead to exponential power for both of them. If you haven't already, check out last week's part one!
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Bacchus Comics
Thank you for the feedback! I might go back and lighten up the previous portion. There’s certain ways to give it that “night” feel without it being actually dark. Last thing I want is for people be unable to see my stories!
kern286
This story has a lot of potential. And I'm glad you lighten up the second set the first one was way too dark. I know your going for a darker foreboding theme. Maybe you could give her a eery glow when she grows. So she's easier to see. Ken
