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Jo's Fair - Page 5 (HD)
🕑 Added 2021-05-22 21:27:01 +0000 UTCI'm particularly proud of this and the next page. Mouse and I worked together more than usual (normally I just describe scenes and provide references, and he just gets it perfect on the first try 90% of the time) on the visual presentation here. I tried to make these two pages feel like "film", rather than a comic, by utilizing framing and distance from the reader. I really hope that the transition from a close-up, to a mid close-up, to a mid-shot to finish Jo opening up about her past trauma adds more emotional impact to the dialogue; that's what I was going for.
Thanks for your patience on these two pages. They were a lot of work and they really needed to be perfect for how important they are to this story and the series as a whole.
Comments
Colson Grainger
Personal; I'll elaborate more on it when the issue is done.
Regdeh
Those angles and dialogue came out so so well. Really hit with the emotional impact on this page and deeply saddening experience for Jo to go through. I can really feel her pain and sorrow. Outstanding stuff as always <3
SilverZeo
Oh my. Such detail... With Jo's mother's condition... did you looked this up or was it an experience for you?
