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What if... motion comic?
🕑 Added 2022-07-29 19:43:18 +0000 UTCWhat do you guys think? This is a very rough test I did for the first page of What Brings Us Together. I'm not sure voice acting is possible for this (as much as I'd like to do it), due to the complexity of directing all that and having to find (and pay!) voice actors, but I can largely handle foley and a bit of music (which obviously isn't in place for the test). Would love to hear some feedback on these.
Comments
Boozin Bruin
Awesome! Makes me wanna VA
Regdeh
I think this is really stylish and the sound effects alone really add to the enviroment and makes the scene really pop out more. It would be very interesting to have voices to the dialogue as well but in a way it allows you to read the characters in your own voice inside and just have the scenario. (of course pricing and directing is a main problem getting actual voice actors. But I think definitely if its at all possible in the near future. That could work wonderfully for your project on this or any future ones.) I really enjoyed how the sequences fitted into together. And seeing what animated parts move without taking too much focus away from the whole picture and not too distracting. Was the right level of movement. Only thing I might personally might change is how the speech bubbles appear. To me they looked more like text messaging bubble movements and didn't really sit well with how they appeared to me. Maybe something like fading them in might work better? I just felt it was a bit too much bouncy movement for, for example. A slower scene like the preview. Other than that! I loved it! I think this could be a really fantastic direction to go in! And something you can certainly share more with peeps in a video format. ^^
